【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

3 w, T# n- Y2 L: P一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
9 Y" l5 m4 F; V% w3 j5 I+ uvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
4 j. ?# d6 i' v# e1 R" ]/ b3 N" x, x) \
& o# w6 b# q3 n7 o* F( r5 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; j4 D+ j7 Z8 r# Y% D% c皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
  p# w, Z+ q- Q2 n% C2 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ y- q* Y( t5 R* c月光闪烁 在我眼中
/ {& k, u+ X: {6 \; cThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

  y& Y; W# ^0 J1 GWith the moon kissing it every night
3 p7 e; |( R- n0 d5 |看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
2 d! O% K! z1 p( Y9 Z怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 ~, U8 s9 O* N5 n/ w, l/ D我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
! z8 Y  y, Y7 l4 k9 [: O. x' `5 B真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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* ^# i+ N- Q1 ?/ f+ ~6 m6 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
+ o) y' E, \  F# ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
/ V6 M- j6 h- J. j9 yI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
1 d, _; p# t0 u3 [% J' nTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
& T% [9 S* g$ {1 o% q若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
4 c0 R0 f! [2 \& c可我依然满心忧虑
; O: O: d2 o' g' vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
4 v  F$ J- r' K$ DI regret not dying
1 g' X8 x/ s. k1 o真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
) X- E! S/ o: l我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
" Q' H  Q. A$ y6 J+ M7 A! `It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
, U' u. K4 p% }- sWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) {  H9 O6 q' G7 Z能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- H3 p  {2 d  M" c2 U爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
3 }! B$ u# T$ s1 aFrom the first moment we met,
( }6 D# A8 s; n( ]' P% R对你一见倾心
2 D: }) _( k% U0 R" X' i- WI already loved you with all my heart
0 _9 u  t: N+ p1 _: {5 n2 I从此别无他意
0 @( G$ Z$ y& {5 W; O5 ~3 b* n- `We meet and talk everyday,
1 a1 z" F+ `! R$ W2 @/ a你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
% _, q9 O+ @- s7 G2 b  YI would probably know how you feel
0 a0 M) k/ v7 L2 {7 U或能知你心意
5 U" f  X9 S! b( S2 j  |; KLove… just the word love
7 [* Z2 U. q" k! q( z4 I爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
# H9 V' h# h* q为何如此难言？
; W- @* b5 r# j' ~7 Y9 S! tI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
9 w$ O; @! }5 Q7 OIf today isn’t too late,
3 g  V& o% p& x! n假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
3 z2 h1 c4 q! L4 O3 m$ L+ MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; l4 F! x" u! s不愿这份爱 逝如流水
" w8 m; ]. ^- G# v# p- ICan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
, L; L8 f' }4 t& \9 n$ D) FEntrust my love within your heart
" t1 T0 c. V# t' J从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ B% @9 ~, \! h# D6 E) C2 F为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
! K# H: h# B- Z6 {But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; w2 Q4 n6 b% w只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
/ v! r- E# }4 C, _$ s4 iIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
$ f! l6 y$ r) S) CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
" W1 J0 I/ C4 f7 W) m' \+ p! vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ r& R: {1 R$ y  W+ N: M3 E不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
* p* y4 s# f" C: v, v& J: v- kEntrust my love within your heart
/ X: B  @$ R! F. l$ k! n. c# a) \从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
) x5 @3 K5 R+ I: \6 Q' a" G从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
! J" ^) B9 q# V老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* p) m9 W( M  L4 q- v# e刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
$ ]  f6 d# s' `4 J- _刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
  K- F( y7 v' C- b3 e& Tvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。