【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

5 p8 H8 d5 h- t再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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4 ~( C! ~" P: U' `The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
/ E# c9 l9 s, lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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$ R( X) l7 ^: t- V8 q- `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
8 ^. W# _* ]' G- {8 L, r1 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
" t8 g; B2 ?: P* b  p; l一片丹心 照耀夜空
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8 p. K& m) f! |* d3 |With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
0 N( r0 I- s0 K! c! e" I) p+ pSeeing the sky content with its love
/ B9 x5 V5 p. _) h夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
' z) j% e4 r, ]: s* U1 nYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
9 i1 ?8 x8 P# Z. N1 N2 Z: s+ pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( e/ {/ r4 w1 c; f/ i, D我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
, B  _* b' [7 W0 N0 K/ J$ s) dI really want to know just how much you love me
3 s* f7 G- z# o( R2 s% R3 e9 l真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 i8 G# f! R9 E4 Q9 M* s$ w4 ^爱你爱你 全心全意
5 x; e' c( j9 j6 B! ?Nothing can compare to my love
! I( Y6 a# v# h# n世间万物  皆不能比

% i6 w* |8 g0 }' j5 A2 S) CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
4 N4 G. m4 @9 R1 O  [, a, ^  H. ~; EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
* T. S  U- M+ C8 E" R+ t+ J我真想看透你的心
5 e3 q0 }1 p6 D. f' y3 AI invite you to rip it out
+ u# B. I: Y* f) C. S你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# |1 v! I- n, ~) T3 u0 `1 d若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
5 {9 I/ I  c. S3 V$ pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
2 I) e' p5 q3 N6 T$ l) t真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
$ O3 A+ ~5 a( n3 B我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
( Z5 X1 ~( _/ ]. b' s  Y也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
! m; E6 P5 j" d5 K7 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; ~+ o, \  Z5 z2 e; o" R( Y能说会道 无以伦比
! U5 E' k6 y+ a# l& _3 F) B5 I. g* a+ XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! k: r( R* K) F) x8 E若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( h8 _2 Z8 N4 }1 F5 T, m从未向你吐露衷情
, [: y, ?1 |* Q& o2 b6 _/ x; Z9 OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
5 s- j( U1 l6 O$ P) ]" @From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
) g5 ?: ]4 ~1 m( KI already loved you with all my heart
) D% j! Z6 Q. Z: w4 k9 q从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
, S* b5 v+ R# o2 W6 J4 ?; y你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
- I  m/ Y  }* @, gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" @& H* P# c& F' J& d% @若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
# z7 n7 h5 W# S# o  \I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
4 M) c; E( p: }8 h0 pLove… just the word love
; ~- V! v" R, V8 X8 @8 }* ~; t' G爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
; W# |  W% B6 |为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
6 _; j4 f$ u8 H$ ~$ h& A+ d: sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
! n! J9 Y- U) K) ^4 cIf today isn’t too late,
" ^$ _; ~7 s# l+ o& R2 h假如还不太迟
" t% p/ u' A7 B5 Z) I9 H5 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
9 F; `. B/ q' D! `1 E  UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
: m' N" J4 o" t5 t" e4 ^可否将它 托付于你?
  [3 w* e2 Q6 H" IEntrust my love within your heart
0 P$ w  Z. y6 j: d- l从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

. D' `& v5 v3 P; v& e" wLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
( A  a  G) S" c7 m8 s我多想向你表白
. W1 H: ^/ Y% r# w  LBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 m1 K" C  W$ ^2 b* F只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
9 F# t1 v+ q# M- \- O5 S) V$ iIf today isn’t too late,
$ Y+ i  I' D* Z! q5 k假如还不太迟
1 [* K6 h6 C, b) N/ A  u- eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, k9 M' N7 Y  K, S* e今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
0 t; h8 h3 o; C! x& o5 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 U" \) c! u, ^1 d9 b4 |不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
$ M* y$ ?2 ]% I5 U可否将它 托付于你？
& ~  w0 v/ |6 SEntrust my love within your heart
" R& [+ z# u- [% h& [( Y* y3 |  P从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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" ~. @) z6 l5 sCan I entrust it to you?
4 H: Q2 ~, X$ z; S9 Y可否将它托付于你？
7 e% A& h- l: `# W: i5 KEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
/ x% ^! P" T# c! V$ ?" ^9 f老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
( [8 e+ k* A6 Y1 bvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。