【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
( i: }# j! r( o2 b. M& Uvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

5 P+ t- a) e( g) N; J再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

0 V7 X. C9 i( G/ ~* oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( U% I% |4 d( N+ B5 p1 B皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 w/ z4 J2 {/ X. N8 J! B. y& ?( J夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

7 O! G! r$ {% \6 P6 q* [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
0 w0 [' O& Z0 Y/ NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
- k1 b% H" ^$ l5 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 |5 k. y- W. J$ j8 ?一片丹心 照耀夜空

4 I9 V# G  |6 r( nWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
) N: B1 Y# Q; L3 L8 K3 `7 w5 K夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
  \8 G, o% r$ WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
' ]0 X# ]0 M. `" c4 H1 e8 WI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
! B/ j0 u; H; Z7 o& E) p7 f1 bI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
$ Q* D/ K7 G) fNothing can compare to my love
7 b6 C% f9 g; ?$ c9 W世间万物  皆不能比

7 o8 y4 f' d+ D+ I2 H: g* {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
* D- V: o" n7 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. H7 V8 `3 r: M& m1 c整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
6 I) H2 p' D+ a  t你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 N5 S$ n8 R4 V+ v若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
, h! Y/ ?) T, O" ?  r$ M' zI’m still filled with fear
0 J' ^2 N7 N' o1 Z可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% w% x& O9 r. d# [! w+ b& H你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
& W6 x. Z% E1 K6 F- ?I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
8 K" i' n' {2 U; e; w0 {) _$ x0 S0 P0 L我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 v2 L. ]/ Q8 n4 f  V% v9 k2 F也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 L/ X! |  w" x) z! e2 R能说会道 无以伦比
6 r+ ?2 l6 C: [" r* z/ l# JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 G1 F5 Z* \- r7 E8 ]) m若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
7 m, v" o' |  V% \  y& q" HRambling on about a thousand words of love
7 Y. D5 o1 K7 |' b向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

4 B( f) U* Y! a( H# JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 r$ }+ \9 M1 o( u+ t6 d* Y. A) P* u% A从未向你吐露衷情
+ ^/ i- i/ C7 I7 y& M9 GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 S0 H3 H9 ~0 M3 F* m爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
( d- E7 ~% k/ k+ ^从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ Y' Q; Z( l; I& _! B奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 H* p0 l5 V. t# }* A! o. s若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
5 z& v0 p' `, \+ U, G爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 l- ~. [8 p8 L$ i) Y: l) t& I为何如此难言？
' Q' a1 a: y7 ^; D5 ^' n! W) BI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
) `, c3 Z! l4 y! }/ RBut I never did
+ n) A& T; F6 F' D% J3 s. C却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 |) e8 w2 _, e2 {. f4 o7 B0 YIf today isn’t too late,
0 c  e  G. {. y' T假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 }2 q+ i  y' L. A/ ~! ?- g! r5 u今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 r9 U7 p8 v% f/ N( ?1 DCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 I2 v7 Q+ q6 X2 D从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

6 }: v. m0 o6 ^& C" L8 e" J% gLove… just the word love
4 P. ^8 u# ]" {( _" _1 r爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
  K. q, A  [9 }' V' T" Y. H* ?为何如何难言？
; _  b' h2 |: }3 `I want to confess that I love you,
4 @4 _$ `& r& e6 v5 {7 A我多想向你表白
8 [& }6 O( u( o* f" L. qBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; I4 W7 u) |; A2 W只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
1 |  r1 n% g. |( ?3 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
1 S! W0 O5 i/ BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 R4 r" s% Q9 v; B- I+ c不愿这份爱 逝如流水
) w8 t5 C; `) I4 L) U- L" z1 p6 GCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
* ?3 _# _: d! z% T* z  v$ u& g, iEntrust my love within your heart
, O/ [+ W' w6 \* _/ |从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
9 L) d! S/ I: `# a7 j7 I, c
Can I entrust it to you?
+ [0 v, n( y% I5 }8 C9 r& r可否将它托付于你？
# V# V+ H, n8 f' tEntrust my love within your heart
% R, k7 [/ b; V9 B9 E从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
8 Y, m$ b: K: S) k4 S; E& h老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* y8 w' ~/ R* n4 c刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
8 \4 R$ c* ^3 j7 V7 k4 e老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
& C# X% {4 h1 p% z$ z, ]刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

& [) ~0 J" g3 e# b. D1 Q$ D3 B不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。