【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
) i8 \' J3 e' m, z' G9 qxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

0 g0 E( B: f" }+ C; ]; h$ K. I再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

; g& e, M: h4 U4 j8 L- }' HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 [* h2 [, b2 x1 U) w3 N7 }; [. e, n皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
/ z2 z: c  r: l# V- BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* w% Q. G! e/ y' q0 K1 v凝视明月 我心欢畅
6 t5 o8 d" ?7 _/ G" s1 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ F0 n2 T* X4 e月光闪烁 在我眼中
& E  q7 I1 t& u: EThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

* q3 z* k+ Y7 o" y5 u% KWith the moon kissing it every night
$ M& V( d1 K' h1 h/ f  o0 q; e) A  n; C看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
% I+ n. c0 P/ J( F, Y0 E夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
4 @, ?+ X$ c; e3 ~+ KIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
+ e. U: }9 w. a; G  n# n* XEvery other word you utter is love
& r% p5 ~* X' [5 W口口声声 说你爱我
7 h5 p( J+ d3 t: S7 H" Z' @I really want to know just how much you love me
4 E5 g$ j  U4 ~/ n8 X: A真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
. O/ e! W! {' W) W+ PI love you I love you with all my heart
+ x: T& f+ N5 z1 t, v+ z爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
& A. E' _: V  ?, e世间万物  皆不能比
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# E/ k' `0 T( U; D+ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
" |- t1 m1 J( Z+ n, lI want so much to see inside your heart
+ l% s  A# M+ q* [( X! g我真想看透你的心
- B2 o1 w# J$ b3 NI invite you to rip it out
. }. v/ m" o' H1 S你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
2 u" v( U/ w  X, eI’m still filled with fear
& _1 ~7 O2 m# P2 h5 G" @4 a, {可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 y' }' g+ J/ S% ]3 Y: W2 b3 |你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
/ T' h: l' {2 f$ _- W* DI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
1 p# J. H! [3 V- f4 f, y6 OI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
* P& D; C4 n6 J1 F也恨不得  多如千万
6 y0 B' I* m  _8 L( W' t6 ^With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 q% j1 W& k2 t- M4 F( {  U9 j& S能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 ]& F! C. l2 ]6 Z, _  N若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
! \7 B8 [7 W3 ~1 ORambling on about a thousand words of love
' p4 N/ ~# M1 `向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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2 r- _- C9 W3 O+ `/ \2 ~: i1 eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: M- s3 [; W0 E: ]6 Y/ H从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
0 Z% u* X. e0 f4 D& |0 FFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
$ O' \0 v7 m* w& Y" r) q+ C从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
5 g$ F; L% ]) R  }) Z) TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ a5 N" u3 y( X1 d# a  Z4 l奈何从未谈及内心
3 l  Q$ G+ _4 F% n- L7 }! f" [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# ]% i# m5 i. W9 L5 Q3 [若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
3 ]3 D6 ?; i# j" p或能知你心意
2 m0 J9 F0 E6 Y. ZLove… just the word love
! c# @$ C3 ^0 d- }' l爱呀，爱就一个字
; V9 B$ B: l' EWhy is it so difficult to express?
! x8 ~* |/ M8 _5 _; ^为何如此难言？
' [- O( T3 V, SI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
0 O8 F$ B! S+ i, GBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 y, a8 l- {* N9 P- _) j, ?只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
* @( d# w% Z& D* P. qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 j# R9 a: l% a1 M% b) H8 T$ v今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
; i0 ?; ^% a7 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
8 T. R$ I0 C9 j) wCan I entrust it to you?
0 Y- G: C& n2 L$ {3 Z  O& ^可否将它 托付于你?
, y+ g8 c, ~0 E. E' q" `, T5 WEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

: u: x% u1 t9 m! mLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
& X8 X- h% i, @" K8 Q" r: V4 i. O我多想向你表白
# Y& V' F4 r) ?% B7 q9 _' H0 S$ KBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; E8 d  c/ {1 w8 Z0 H- i只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
& Z! o( d9 C& R3 |7 a4 q; C" `( u% |If today isn’t too late,
- p/ i1 C# `& b, ]假如还不太迟
6 C# l: D6 V# aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. L8 P: L8 q* L# Y/ A: L+ E/ I今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
5 J7 r6 f7 ]* E8 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
% Z+ B" S6 p% s$ b- x% M: bCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
/ M( v. x0 w# t7 ~# {( w, M$ REntrust my love within your heart
  ?: t1 ?& M' D4 p. \+ G从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

- W8 `; }# K5 a8 B' Y0 H; A8 gCan I entrust it to you?
8 b. o) X& F9 s# U: X可否将它托付于你？
0 d( D# {1 ?  t7 C' OEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
  S/ D$ }& A/ X9 Q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
+ p7 ^, e" f1 _5 C3 ?老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
% \2 s5 p; P; L- zvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。