【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
* Z  C, S0 T0 w/ ^深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

1 C$ _' [4 n6 V* JFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

9 ]2 F& z7 _, n- `3 B2 @在遇見你的第一刻
$ T6 @5 u7 y; B$ G2 i你已經深深的佔領了
5 F( i! ~$ z" u. R- ^我的心
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5 D  o; @; r# k+ p; |- [0 q* s8 v9 wWe meet and talk everyday,
/ y  z: A8 m3 u+ }& GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
! U8 |/ E8 W; L/ X還是不能肯定你的心意

% ^8 l9 }9 T% ~) jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ [( h: ?% i2 D8 J6 |7 \- OI would probably know how you feel
) U. A" I: \2 X2 @凝視著你的眼
# [  C5 V' P+ O8 h搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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' k# C9 M8 m$ y( o+ `8 r愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?

/ I8 l3 {+ Y6 aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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* L4 V. d' M# C5 S& Y* j# W  V, v# `愛你 想要告訴你
/ q( s! g; j7 X卻總是說不出來

* j& S7 H$ A) D& \" C$ W* T7 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' E- d( ^" [# c5 X3 [$ \+ z也許有一天
" |0 e" F0 F/ @4 e你將從我指間滑漏

4 k  V- f0 W( @) @8 nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
" H4 ^1 W/ k, \2 |) m讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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7 z$ T0 U" i0 H+ J; lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

( z" q* R" p& R* W不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  O. W/ T, F' e) d- a4 ^可否讓我托付給你?
6 I7 F1 J6 Q# ?6 w8 J3 \6 }托付我的愛
& H0 d- ?' S; P0 C收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

1 Q  l8 Q' n. LI want to confess that I love you,
, A! n5 g& j% L+ U5 H/ t" G. n' uBut I never did
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1 t9 g$ p# A% w9 Z" [0 P. L愛你 我想要告訴你
9 J) P6 U4 S" m% I3 V: D) l卻還是說不出來

$ \, q4 J& {5 B& u9 R% k, W  F' SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
8 @5 g6 C! }7 R/ b你將從我指間滑漏
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; K+ t* [2 y4 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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, i$ g: U) l8 H希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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: c. }2 B+ t2 T4 L2 C+ \3 F& sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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! r& }* N% T5 e/ n( K不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
: U9 Y7 _8 c( R. q/ |Entrust my love within your heart

5 N$ ^( _; ]. {" d! B2 ?+ i可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
' E  Y6 y5 x. E2 i8 S# i/ z收在你心裡

0 ^- `9 `- ^/ HCan I entrust it to you?
, b9 k2 }2 D% A& \Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
) L  ?2 S$ i( I/ H/ B+ f& K! I0 e- h托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿
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3 S  L  w3 O" q3 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 g/ a* P! Z8 D( \4 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

  l$ E  C+ _( e2 d/ v' |# w3 l皎潔月光下
+ W0 {9 p/ t5 \. x天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
2 T$ Q4 s- I  ?我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! m$ {" b+ F. {/ sThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 ]5 Q0 g1 M. L4 f8 T' g3 ]* d. y, ^With the moon kissing it every night
: D  U' c( ^6 k% |' ?Seeing the sky content with its love
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. F+ O3 ~! n3 Z1 }) m; V月光映在我的眼底
3 Y# X& W$ @" ?. L0 b月夜陪著我一起沉醉
6 o6 r, Q- o5 `, |$ G3 Q7 ]月光輕吻著夜幕
/ [0 z, T) i0 S. e! o- a% R星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
" }$ ]) b( U1 o& F害怕我們的愛
# n1 d8 ]% Q# r8 k終將逝去
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  I/ [' _2 w6 w* I- e+ C1 YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

" O' K0 o; E# P4 i9 t  r你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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, G3 o! c' ^& B/ j$ g: A: OEvery other word you utter is love
+ ?9 E! i$ ]5 G) p* ?5 d4 iI really want to know just how much you love me

& B* R# Z4 j- I) k* z你的一言一語都是愛
, Z& z, E9 e8 x7 S我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
6 }6 _6 c: u) F( dNothing can compare to my love
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6 U3 Z7 Q: i$ O# @+ g我的愛 全心全意
' n% f* _( l) y$ u; h- |: K你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

3 z+ C) n" z# Q9 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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: S4 |' ]8 E' {% ]8 H% bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

+ i: p( e: A6 D  c7 e" l$ `I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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4 l2 W+ p% e$ P1 f- ?8 i! VI invite you to rip it out
1 Z6 s0 t/ @% ?+ K( V% P# @6 pTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
9 }6 t9 ]9 _. c7 g+ q0 B我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

  x( |0 u- e' g9 p6 D7 w7 OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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4 x" F* q6 X; i; y8 S  j5 L6 N2 O我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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2 Y& n- K% t- z0 x5 j. v, q& q% p, n1 e; gI regret not dying
1 ^' I/ z- d; EI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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' L3 o: M$ D; z, Y( F可惜我未能以死證明
8 T3 x+ T8 O* p4 j( \# d. e我只有一張口
' g& p" I" K( q* ?0 A遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

- y# Y  W) e  J4 D0 V3 F4 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
" G/ V, f+ F) \' n9 [  I, \- m千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
5 |- Z1 S/ ?4 Q2 I( Kxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

% |+ v# ?1 b1 H是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒