【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
$ s/ F3 G0 {3 r袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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$ b0 d: H- v# E* Q  M我想我從未表露出
) @8 S* s1 G6 X+ V深藏在我心底的那句
6 x" {! B1 H, P1 A/ L我愛你  

$ Q1 `8 P9 ^8 K8 @2 D: i4 @  m  YFrom the first moment we met,
- j# P6 m- g. k/ @9 uI already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
) V# S1 _( [+ F2 q5 Y你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

1 S. H9 E0 F! [3 hWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 s. Z3 }" a2 K0 FI would probably know how you feel
& A5 H+ p! _9 c# v) w/ O. w$ T凝視著你的眼
+ h- l. W5 }  _3 _, b& n搜尋著你的魂
. B9 ^9 y( y! h" o; n我也許就能了解
5 ?. c! w  a  j+ a你的心情
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$ ]: }# H6 `8 T4 ?. sLove… just the word love
7 Z7 k; h. \9 j8 N3 R$ ?Why is it so difficult to express?
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( y( \' u7 k6 H0 w' D3 n1 V愛  簡單的一句愛
  d* M2 ^9 y6 B為什麼
/ o( u/ C8 N' r: ?. k4 E如此難以表白?
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' k/ r2 r5 E( F3 ]9 Y# s/ q3 T) ZI want to confess that I love you,
+ S/ M( a" [6 m$ cBut I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 j1 e  x: N  d$ Z4 U也許有一天
: {) s/ T1 g) e你將從我指間滑漏
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% f; @6 s; T* K; r- T, |# KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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) k4 W% a% _$ S- u; b9 v4 a% v希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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1 l% l  |2 ]; L; s0 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

7 u/ E  {2 l1 F! L( q( A9 \不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
8 H" ]5 I/ z$ D$ _7 W8 I2 K" n. c# w收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
3 o% Z5 \8 U1 Y% N) w# ^; h# qWhy is it so difficult to express?
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* Z* F5 U8 W* D. m4 ^6 Q5 W1 i愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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$ W, [! }! }: h5 n5 I( E' I% HI want to confess that I love you,
2 [+ U4 m$ @3 dBut I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
2 u- C7 d% F8 z9 i卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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. L0 f/ k0 K* C# ]: QIf today isn’t too late,
- |# @0 {6 ?4 L* iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
3 @+ J4 T5 h2 W3 n1 E讓我向你表白
; v3 q3 _' s+ k" W$ O0 m我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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' m; X+ x9 N( iCan I entrust it to you?
9 ^" H  m% I' i2 E8 MEntrust my love within your heart

1 @3 ?2 S% c  F4 z2 w4 w' k, e- q可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
/ g/ b* u8 U1 Y3 w7 G: @收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
0 @, x. [  p3 [% g4 o' N托付我的愛 收在你心裡


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" t/ U0 k1 G" X1 e- B# P  d& [# v对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
: c+ r, ]) ^1 y) i9 i凝視著星空
8 R3 n  N: ?1 n- O我心充滿快樂
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& E1 f! {1 Z' b# ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* K( p% g& q) l% {  NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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6 g# i; B) n/ u6 M月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
" [" w% e$ W) }+ {3 ~: C) x星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

; N# \+ W/ j3 K: `我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
& ]+ R+ c$ N- ^( q) z7 C9 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
9 v- \: A5 c$ \6 ]6 {愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
( F' d4 P5 C2 g8 K7 QI really want to know just how much you love me

* U; e  s. O- {" @你的一言一語都是愛
/ i  w" n' z7 a0 a5 A我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
3 U  D1 h- l9 F6 g4 |: rNothing can compare to my love

+ F  \- t( g2 U3 E8 N; f' s我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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7 `# U* ?! _4 W2 `* \; ]$ ~% z' a能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

, Q! h# }0 h( M5 x3 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

% u: z0 }+ z8 wI invite you to rip it out
7 R& k) H0 i" I# wTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
1 O  p8 X$ _0 y4 {6 q6 b; m8 _7 e我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

8 N$ i4 x" _9 s% X5 s. V/ _I’m still filled with fear
  }1 m. D- ?( RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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3 `. ^4 ~; c" i- a, v我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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9 W) ^2 Q) e4 \" o+ NI regret not dying
4 O8 C& R" A- lI only have one tongue
6 a$ {+ O5 d6 b+ t- A* [+ XIt’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
, m' \' s0 X4 C5 {0 i# j我只有一張口
. v) [; o& ~" }$ O6 N$ h$ k遠遠不及千萬

# g; E& m- J$ u7 D1 A. c& wWith such a tongue as yours,
- Z, X* D: q; s# Z& S' D  u9 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
- t9 Y, F! C% r# ^6 n9 U$ F9 F你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 f& c5 Y  |6 d- }6 @# b如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
1 {& k0 `# t0 X2 |7 E千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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$ ?: V; I3 z% ]7 p5 `& P# o, O1 D訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒