【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) [. y! k, ]1 P" iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 o$ E  {1 n+ ~: M! `# E* `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& ^9 q! r3 o0 A+ V+ kWith the moon kissing it every night
: X) P; X8 W/ D% q0 b- X1 ^  P' wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  `; n# \  F7 q8 n" B6 wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' G% y! l  m! G1 uI want so much to see inside your heart
; e( c  n: N) Z; Z% }6 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% \2 I- q- W8 ^9 _3 J2 |With such a tongue as yours,
) t+ Q7 p8 G* g( Q$ _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ M) E/ i. R: @& ]7 ]' X+ j: r" [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( S  L/ J$ U. K& G$ L6 y4 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( _2 D1 ?- Y* O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 |7 K* I' z, a( m3 w( I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! \0 |. N* Q# q6 z  Z; W6 B) X6 |4 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 Z& [* |$ W; B3 v* ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% y! x& F, o2 C  E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( F! c& F4 u. ?- S' k3 A, s4 b4 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ r( ^5 h, N7 L9 `- o! Q' n. O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- g4 Y3 t0 j7 L9 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 h$ u* T! o0 P) j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% E; Y6 q8 Z/ ?5 x9 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. z: x2 Y9 z* `) z$ D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 G. E2 I# k- t9 ^* G; O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 X0 h/ E4 O3 ~- h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ c$ r6 |$ i2 B4 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: b. {. s( U3 J/ x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) G, u8 T# V, s2 X8 G4 d$ z/ u8 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# g) q: q( g( F  m$ p+ ?! S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ~0 i8 O2 u: X6 h/ N# f+ A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, V8 `% I, @, q7 A* L* r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 \; P" [2 L+ }$ E$ B, s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ]; k1 }7 P( ?5 E6 J! ~: F( H<P>I regret not dying</P>
; G# J7 @1 C; l% C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: x& S: y# W9 X  A( Y3 |- T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% X7 K( P: @8 s1 c  W0 Z0 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: _8 ^( y7 O/ J7 T$ M& u' n9 S5 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. i: y1 D+ u$ I$ e  b, G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 n* q7 W* ~. H8 j+ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 |* T! q  c3 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>