【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: q! m1 }8 y' B3 d+ Q' o+ R2 i9 {0 KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' M" e" W* Y8 x3 {; |% GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" L$ D6 T* X8 ]" C! W5 t7 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 L  _) s* j" K. y5 e7 HI love you I love you with all my heart
9 Z& T- ^2 X5 m, ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. O, [4 }6 |) nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: T0 b( p! o, g  z5 j$ xI’m still filled with fear
% t7 {+ z4 I0 Q' i9 ~. N# zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ J# U6 m4 m5 B, q' s3 B1 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ q1 y% _' k' k0 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 e7 m) B" L: g" T. r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: g9 e8 ]  P7 E8 e' E! |: \3 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  s  j/ G( Q8 P. V; j8 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 Z4 g: T# j3 t4 U$ U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: S/ n: X. k9 s  U1 k! G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! t6 L3 y- W6 |3 [. L5 c+ }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 W$ @) J+ a, G1 H0 ^* \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 G# u; c8 u) s! s* T# O# X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 i. s. H1 s% O2 @, I/ \( w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; s3 H/ b9 E1 i3 Z4 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) c: R% Y1 _! W( X- _( E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, a$ a; D. @( B# g5 y8 Y4 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) a) Q; Y4 Z1 R4 C2 F, U  i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ~- B9 |, u: ]5 {6 E. ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 ~$ R6 O4 W& i7 O3 k7 B) {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ _4 A$ o4 c' I" f: t' |  X7 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: s0 d2 ?& k$ k, c0 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ W5 z  c' n( K4 w3 _- z( a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% P# L5 c: ?& T$ p$ o2 U2 t: y! p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) l, Q0 Z8 u! S0 q# ?' O. z* @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( c4 H9 h9 V# Z8 `8 i9 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( v6 H9 \: p* \) Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ i6 T4 ~7 W! }  O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; M& O: l- [  t: M7 b3 K我请你剖开它
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# K7 |8 ^% k! `2 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>