【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 e6 t  I! L( H% ]4 |& |5 m8 `With the moon kissing it every night
8 v2 X* @" q9 {  USeeing the sky content with its love
6 n; |3 K& W. |" M7 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" o: x' J# E; |  ~I really want to know just how much you love me
) m. G+ L7 H/ {9 kI love you I love you with all my heart
) ]2 D- \& H' J& Z- Y: @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 H! A  Q7 p9 L& i1 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% a' m3 y& o$ V, m$ k+ _. jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ L/ w4 M% x1 [, gI regret not dying
. N  p8 C# J- E! A9 @. p! AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& h+ L3 t7 m  n2 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  U6 E% n  j% o- wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 |0 R1 t' V- m. q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# ?% ?$ x, a- F# H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 f& w, ^" X  M7 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  s, q5 v8 W7 m$ V5 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. K7 h3 m5 K  Q" V& _, l) I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( Q9 s& I, b1 z4 N6 I( @' A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" P& f1 ]1 k: ~+ h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 E% O6 C% r1 {, Q6 T7 j+ |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! L) g& j/ V( ^4 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' r1 R: }5 t( Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" y" k8 |) F# t0 m- `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ T9 a! Z# b' c7 d+ p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 k/ o" U0 y4 t0 U1 e2 Y4 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
% g4 ^3 F8 W! j  l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 F7 J* f- s/ J2 {+ L3 Y# L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 L* ]7 {  m: N4 R2 M9 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# B" E) Y$ c/ {% r& Q* p" K- D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 K4 t3 G  r, Y& r2 D& y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 U9 |' o+ c' Y; N# U- O( u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# Z7 E7 P4 Q) A: i4 G/ b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% U) ?8 w- V( ^6 m5 ]$ h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ~- v1 O& _9 o: g3 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 e8 S, u! s+ [1 y/ p" s- x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ j! Y- G( K3 O- l5 i' x) [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, K7 S" e% _. Y9 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# M4 Y+ [  z$ H. |$ A4 x$ I6 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ e. s* t) l+ F( J# S& q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  h' c' f% Q' m. `) e; l) x' N5 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ^: W% e0 j* s% m) S$ v8 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  L5 h! O" J) }! M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, G8 S& A" w, L* J  Y1 [- r: ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ J( y7 J( |7 |  b' f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>