【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  B0 J' j  i# n- w6 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 @3 ?9 @' P: GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 W' b" Q" {0 C3 M3 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 A/ ?$ Z1 F; @0 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 O% g- a6 f( y- D) K2 l3 ESeeing the sky content with its love
* W! Q) {9 |  bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: {+ K, `' o: L+ @* d& xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ M4 s  X$ Z; T6 w+ p& FI really want to know just how much you love me
. N9 O  y/ b# `  ?7 w; z( QI love you I love you with all my heart
0 E$ `) X0 f/ `) {3 a" j2 a: ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ S4 y% c6 h; {0 c1 ]) z( qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ P! A8 `; S: p# \7 T3 uI’m still filled with fear
; s& H2 t5 w! X; I& r8 A4 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  t0 S3 [, I! VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; n5 l+ Q4 C& U7 }: W0 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 |! R3 n8 N" i6 q. X- J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 y: T# O  c7 [. J' z: T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 [  a5 I8 [$ p* i7 h2 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 C& o$ c: I" p% X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; z9 R  X0 U3 D: o* I$ a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 t& ^2 _$ |, P* z; e' d" B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) _1 K/ w) U5 z4 X9 T2 u& v1 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 r* B6 L" E( |( v( W) u<P>你无需担心</P>
, q9 V7 D- R4 v  X. Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) f4 L7 u, S/ x; Y  C, D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' ^0 x( l' h+ H) R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ]/ P- u+ ~/ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, {2 B, r# X$ r8 c, s7 C$ C8 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* I! T; T1 B  a  y  S) d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" N- Y: r2 ^9 y$ `' \" j* K1 }, G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 [# f- O. }9 J) f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: @/ n& u% d4 L! ?/ K/ V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. L% W3 ]: q) Z( t  S3 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- n- S+ l6 N# `. p; l. `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! L$ r# S' \: e7 m, ]$ i& C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 ]+ O$ s2 @5 D1 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# r, f7 h7 d4 m( m5 |% G* }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" b5 G4 p# A! ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ w- r8 N  \1 |+ o. K7 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ^! }+ N: \/ Z: w) B8 |) t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Y% s# g9 F5 x; A9 h; P; T! F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 \% i0 t9 {2 J9 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 v3 a# l4 k# ~# u7 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>