【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 ^$ z% w) q. ]6 c1 @) j8 A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* P: m7 k1 n8 H' X5 P" F' QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 {( f4 Z' C( j: }% g3 b4 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ z6 U9 k. e  t' X  }9 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 C- ^1 e" J% o0 J0 `& nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ W% r/ W2 I# ^  _, QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 N( K7 }2 n/ g8 K7 RI want so much to see inside your heart
2 l: c4 E; S8 s3 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 v+ _. F2 L; G6 |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# B9 X- X& z+ t4 f5 r4 A5 mI regret not dying
" A- Q* e& F+ o) m% h% _( T3 j, aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, Y6 Y: z' r$ j( j8 Z$ ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* I$ ?! e; g1 b6 ?8 }) C1 q( R* iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 \2 i/ y0 W  y( @9 o- ?; ?* Q4 v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ R0 s1 I, g# S: X/ X0 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ e6 `/ ^3 x- I) O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( ~. M7 i  j/ O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' N% W  Z; J2 D5 e8 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 E5 z8 }4 [/ P* D$ G; |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. v$ ~& F% N  i0 g0 z8 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ E  r4 v% F9 i4 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! e1 g) ?( f- x  B1 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. l5 j# T- C+ f& u# h3 t0 g$ U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. t" P7 ~1 G9 Z) x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 t# i* A2 T+ q" H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 H4 Z0 d2 c8 n1 T8 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 G" L( K( a1 V( b2 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% v, t& x' p6 ?. J3 E0 {' f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! |1 L) H8 M  G' m! `) Z0 L0 H  e1 z, k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- {$ l$ h1 z# d4 w- d5 {9 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. A; T, [3 U4 s* Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 H9 P" f: }& V+ h- N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 [  d1 u0 n- d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% E$ U' X6 ]7 x+ Q9 C0 W% V  Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" Z* q0 [% W+ V5 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 E6 N- T* r: X& b  j2 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" E5 F. u  w) g- h, Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 j3 Y7 {, M0 S7 @7 `* @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 `: W5 c0 R: i<P>I regret not dying</P>
( l5 t8 ?3 s3 C+ D+ b6 I$ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% r) z' ]; x# q' ~- y( q, |( x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. r) H) t- R* U- K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' a1 n% E+ g( I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- I' P/ F  `6 |! t1 {: R! i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  l9 ^4 l% |  q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ m8 m) A9 K( c7 m
我请你剖开它
3 c+ T9 N8 e- K; N& U
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>