【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. e8 j! E7 n! `The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 C! Q. D) M9 C1 X  FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! d0 L9 t* @& [' EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 |6 ?; m8 x* x" l6 N; d% f! DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 A: N. q9 [& x+ i2 [1 }( K) j. gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% `7 ?; i5 D: K$ F2 {# j( \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 I# c! D; I+ S6 U4 u, tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; c/ L! i$ B7 A9 Z- b( u" |With such a tongue as yours,
6 G5 ^1 Z& m: i2 K9 L& eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; t7 |$ ?1 a$ @# nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  R! N/ p) ]2 A1 Q9 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' p- D. p8 C" ?. ~& \- o8 {1 e; m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  V7 v* ]& A& I: r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  _9 ?, j* T% J6 Y* f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, f# P& t/ a( W) }+ I* ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ r( K* z1 x7 K5 F" r- J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* `3 b$ t2 B$ T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' v  f( d* J4 _5 l0 ^" \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  e6 ?, \3 N# Q% Z5 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 @# m" `: |/ [0 v4 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- ], _0 o" m% [5 [1 B. w" G: o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& P, V3 R6 y6 U1 \* W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& x9 ]$ }6 p- C5 L+ z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  U( r7 n' b" P; N% l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# ~/ t6 ]% _- t; ^/ y6 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ v5 w' E7 }# K, A* n8 w" a  i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, O( l5 l* `0 K0 ~# u8 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 Q) `2 z, D& c) n0 g* m- D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: d3 E  x' q8 _3 v: w! H: ]/ X$ Z  H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 R( C/ W# X) {7 R. p" q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ L3 W0 w; ]4 Y& ^# {4 B5 f0 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 f% _/ V1 k1 ^2 f: P4 Q8 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 t4 L) S( Z0 E- _, U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' y, k. Y" w1 u6 q1 T/ E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 d& |9 v" L7 t* H* l! Q: p$ {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 M/ p" c& j" a1 y! t  B  ?% Q5 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 N; J5 \, \; {/ g5 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 B/ L4 E& T3 J+ A: t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 T4 A% o0 H( C4 e/ \! \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% P4 r# z$ v, G( [$ v* g/ p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>