【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! q8 {: u& L8 J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 l# m$ v5 N' Y1 u* d: q4 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 p" g5 z* K. g5 T+ i/ M: S6 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  g) r' G2 ~5 `The sky is happy down to its soul
9 B* u2 ]. |, y  s4 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 o" j; n' n1 u1 u# ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) D% H$ E! z8 F' BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& G8 U4 `  T7 D0 Z0 B  hI really want to know just how much you love me
* Q: j3 c. g/ D0 Y' d; _$ l4 D5 UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ]6 Y! r' @( S* tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 ^+ c6 R  H$ L7 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& g8 p0 h( h. s% U4 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 {8 }: w2 Q9 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" R  I& r; P* u7 ~9 Q! M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, p6 A/ {1 [% p+ j! H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 x) u5 B; O3 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) S( F% B, ~6 P8 N# m$ M9 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' J* {2 |- K' P$ z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ P7 m- t1 I5 t9 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  R! @5 g7 i& C- d8 x, k* z) T% j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 A* z8 t, W0 P( s8 {( d3 d3 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ _+ h: X6 `# C( B% V% p: C/ C# L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. _! v9 y' L# j& p% I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: n/ l( |& j3 I* S5 g: q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 c1 U) s. X, R# i& `6 ^$ f& U% N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- E2 q% \6 S- }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 z4 q/ u5 O. Y. \/ K9 W5 |( v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 c. F; o# e5 N7 G( {  r( P+ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 w3 F* J' e3 D: r  n6 ?. x5 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 {, i; R5 h0 L  i) H& c2 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  C0 t/ M+ u" x" E$ B0 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ U* T& N/ F4 Q) l( Q" N0 E' G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( W; \8 _; F  K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  P" X% u) c6 C* ]3 W$ e! U# h/ l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: u9 P0 x3 V$ c: [* c) z0 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* X" s  f" k5 S  j, I6 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% D) \& u0 Y2 d- c% P; f3 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 P) g8 Y1 Z  f$ Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 g4 h- ]# O: A4 K7 }9 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 Y4 c) ]2 b( V( i/ u4 P. D. x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' Z: [  ]3 X' s; V7 U  T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>