【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 I2 ?5 C7 W4 {! q5 E1 e4 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 J1 x# Z$ Y; O9 r+ S5 ASeeing the sky content with its love
8 h- K$ v: h9 \/ B2 T" t# @+ P% U2 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 T/ C" g) E% k8 C! s: D- `% CYou needn’t fear anything
% x# Q+ w4 T- x( OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ q$ |0 {7 l; [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) }3 L) l1 J9 V- b% L2 F/ GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. l- C% K, B- w6 r% O) MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) y3 Y. j* V# f9 O) HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ S/ J8 i% M2 ?- J  YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( o9 B4 {4 u0 ^0 m: u- S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 }! v% O$ Z: s5 y3 K0 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( a* m# z  ?. o2 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, m5 E- ~9 O& [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ G4 Y1 u2 W0 x5 G, ~. F7 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( x7 d3 p! w7 ]. Y' R. I! L3 i1 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ `, P- y3 S! O5 T+ c2 T9 R0 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ f0 Z! b' c/ Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 _. |" J6 C2 a8 S$ _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 _3 i  a. p3 w: K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: `  E% X8 h; _: j4 M2 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, @8 ?4 |0 L$ v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 c7 L1 z# ^, P* W: Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 Z* r  T0 ?; |9 s! Q9 G$ R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 y6 o+ L0 x+ h9 k8 X3 i; L7 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* g* r! \7 O0 H9 g& c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% d& t" f. \) W3 d6 P- `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 w: R8 b* M, l. `& A+ h6 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- B' ~) H, F& X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) r& Z3 X% F/ X7 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# M/ z  P0 F9 F1 b/ B4 @, H  Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 h' o- b# k( v/ y$ q2 Y! b  d5 c4 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  W8 q$ n3 E. T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 C4 Z% v3 R! Z, t6 u* ?- R; g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% E9 G/ j7 |, {! d% m) {% s& }$ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" ?. J2 ~5 r0 A我请你剖开它

/ d: j9 L% h+ m* _/ u3 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' n# ?  n' P0 s/ j* b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>