【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 g3 j! ]2 T4 W0 |) M, jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 r. ]5 ^9 E3 H* n1 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; ?9 ]% \' g$ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  F, D" M# Z6 u  g6 X) BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( P) X9 ^, O& L# t3 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 w( V' Z0 \5 N) p7 L: ^4 b  FYou needn’t fear anything
' v1 e2 t1 O( WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, [. Z3 _; @- k& ]6 Z, TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 E* M( p; U& ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 H& n8 m  x3 `6 g* _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 `6 j! g1 [) J7 _% HI regret not dying
; Y! k$ i5 X: [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 n( ]; q5 v' V6 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 F+ V6 d$ K+ S, X4 K5 {( i8 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 W3 P. x( D7 R& F0 }9 }/ `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ T6 N3 r3 r% R2 \$ n6 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! s& ]" m, M' n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ U5 y. C. n( u, S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ n' P8 W4 D4 h: ]. S4 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 E0 |7 S) E! V: g& G9 {, [! y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 D# S. `  O. Y- C- B  i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 G* A$ J' r* D0 s/ N; D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 h8 q' J; _. J& @  Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. c. I: R- j+ ]% u  [" }/ X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, q( N3 f& l/ N$ f0 g  F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 f# `" j- z$ f8 l* h& g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% t: {0 n2 B4 Q- q) g( C7 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& s  E3 ~2 I: L) l* G' `9 K. s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) c4 ], z; n9 |. _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 w  D7 w8 h+ |- y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 c$ K& d2 X- l! ~& y$ }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 b+ Z. x& H9 y  T. F4 ?& H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 v3 L3 A! l' @( z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 \- e' ^0 @! V; w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* v- U& p5 `3 D5 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 B. J" q$ R- n. D/ Z" E4 u8 [' E7 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! b$ {9 a4 \. }8 Q  q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" y6 t" m' C: |* e% o8 R4 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 Z2 i- A' S! K我请你剖开它
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' u+ A: R5 _8 D1 ^: r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: X2 X  |' }8 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>