【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. ~  p% ~/ Z- t0 q2 R9 V: gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" J% C  K4 C: r, x  ]) L% rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 b$ ]8 ~# a+ f4 a% HWith the moon kissing it every night
( d& A( T5 n2 {1 R" MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; N# v5 D/ K: r# H3 AEvery other word you utter is love
( c( W5 ^3 c1 {$ w- M5 K" bI really want to know just how much you love me
) j$ O9 D, V$ ?( e$ Y  \I love you I love you with all my heart
1 x2 |6 n, F! O1 L; f1 kNothing can compare to my love
2 W" m4 K0 A8 B* a0 v9 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 i6 D5 Y. z# DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, v3 n$ O  m, N/ F1 z2 x: _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 i! D- I2 D, z3 RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 z* i1 X  [: O- ]9 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) {% u+ E) c2 |% F  M$ i" LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 i  O$ n- T, ^7 }5 ^5 ~& z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# J7 F+ d+ W5 q& _6 k4 H# Q  p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ I8 }( r3 y/ s$ B; n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% P7 u  o4 i. x3 X& p+ J; w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 p' D+ J$ _* F  W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 C& E; b: ~& k4 q; k& Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  r# ?, R7 e( H/ s/ e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 }. U. A, H# P: Q' ?; q' B" B. M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 N# P8 s# H- y  r1 O- z+ R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' _4 q, v$ _# W4 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, M' i8 z) O3 {" e3 C6 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: l- I/ e2 f0 ^& Y3 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ X0 `7 Y6 v1 F9 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 V- ?" y5 B" M/ u' p$ d5 s: G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 c& t, c4 c$ ?' v+ I$ c( d" b5 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 Q8 g  z3 c9 A8 l' k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 E! g. ^. \" P) s8 h) e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 K; t! \6 t6 G1 l/ d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: F$ S% I6 ^0 c1 Q, G5 \- w3 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 w# D$ J% ~2 x7 [! O! M" }0 p4 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 q8 z; X; O" O+ l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ e& H+ ^& S' r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% I8 |. Q3 {- L- f+ B1 R9 R5 T0 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ u; j5 [0 j5 S6 @9 B+ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' f* [% ?+ i; d0 T( F5 V+ I& m3 _6 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% e( B( o& j/ k5 e4 Z0 i  M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 y' L3 ]' w8 ?$ ~( q9 c9 _  A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 U' k$ L4 B" o. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ]/ t0 w+ M) T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: }5 d! H% ?5 V: C/ H7 J6 U6 q( I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>