【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, F6 r  |  [% RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! Y! n0 F# K7 L1 A8 A" N9 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* u, @" W* k0 L0 j1 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
- R! P3 P# O" v- {" PWith the moon kissing it every night
! n% g- Q) C' J" |0 hSeeing the sky content with its love
6 f- X5 g% Z- VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 C" H. ?* k$ f1 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! v9 q% x2 j. F2 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 Z. s7 h, `; _' ?4 D) iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( j- M; o( a/ i8 \, iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; A! y# I/ ]  n' [7 q( V* gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. D3 V; h$ F3 M: `* _% cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* r% a" c& H$ {0 \& G* sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' X$ M7 b4 \: j. p  ?$ q5 x+ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. R9 |- r4 ]) @" Q: w1 H% B/ {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ |( t( ?' S; |6 D& ?: A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ Z0 _! i3 L6 j" A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  n0 F4 P$ O" C3 ?- x5 U  q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 g% g& a' F3 M! R7 A/ r& [4 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: ~  `0 k6 I- @, A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; R  D$ t0 V# J" L! w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 @, r: X2 l; U! U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Q# o1 w  d  N' P3 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- h5 Z1 E) @8 l6 A+ X: u2 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, s! Q3 u) Y* P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" f! M. `: D# x7 k7 o8 u9 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: I7 W. T( n& `7 T7 ~. W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 O9 @9 T7 w( {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 o2 P+ T$ n6 ]7 J3 q+ T6 k<P>你无需担心</P>
% e! [$ n5 U/ D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) A2 m. [4 [. Q- [. y3 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  Y1 y$ ?9 L9 ~- g" x* ?0 I1 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ O4 @7 ^/ o/ j0 ^- a1 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! P; V" K8 T3 n0 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 v1 ~* a2 p- r2 v. ?. w% d4 P0 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( V- D3 X- f+ o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 [2 b" p1 V/ k0 [0 }8 t8 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" c3 S9 ?: ], Y+ ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( ~7 i+ L6 f4 S8 Y9 ]( U. C; L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 I4 x% c0 s* w% |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, V' |& j* W; p8 P0 J( U7 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; u2 z' f$ V- A& T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. D) O1 k8 K/ O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* v# K; H# L& O9 D7 j% x6 K: ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 a) Y& G! X; n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# t( Q4 I5 E& p  z- @! [+ p! I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" j+ m% V/ N$ y4 \, |7 u* o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ C+ ^$ j4 O# R( l7 D4 V( n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>