【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  `" ]' E- L- y$ O8 L1 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 S+ J' G0 x" B" u  n7 KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  F* I( o9 W8 H. f3 U( T9 l, wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% _, j! N$ ], h) u- t6 f# hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! Q; U/ `2 W& }6 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) |7 h8 K5 _$ uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# Y' o1 y. L3 ~& K( V' yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 Q; W& ]$ i9 w4 M4 E0 ~, ]5 X& WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& f% A) R4 I# ~4 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& o. g+ T; V/ e% w% j+ t1 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ M! A9 S) C4 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, C1 l5 e, |7 s! @6 D+ m0 e4 K0 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' H' _7 n6 B" W8 e/ m/ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- z* Q. t$ W- c5 Q9 `3 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 i" ]7 y, Q6 Z; n( J  L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! Q' E" P/ s" b) I5 X4 Y, g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, u( N: q' s8 O- g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 u) ]* X2 ]4 J' x8 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ n$ v% k2 Q6 c) ?6 m+ G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 u, g2 B3 ?6 T6 @) l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' c' W* Z/ t6 B: L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ o; }/ Q2 h  C. \4 g! d6 Y; r& I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 R+ j- P- x* f7 S<P>你无需担心</P>
6 o4 x" H" i$ u: W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' d5 t1 g" P3 y5 p7 j! _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ A) g( u% b* w% C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' X! V4 Y; H$ ~2 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 q  V  A6 N- s4 ?# ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; }  v8 u- V, ?3 A2 H' j1 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; r2 H. Z! a" L( S  O6 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 ?# p1 x1 s; `4 P# \  T3 l8 n* h5 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" I' x9 Y/ p5 ?; f5 W2 ~% d" B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; q; [! X# ^( A" b  Q/ W7 O/ p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 {( w. L; s; C4 _4 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ {  l: X2 J7 ~9 R3 C% T! c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. u+ S3 u9 }" L: G, X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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( S/ ^, T4 c3 y' ?0 S0 i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>