【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* f2 {( q/ N/ PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% ]" U# t- W9 f$ sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 y, D- J( P8 R1 p( G4 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 F9 L* n4 \0 X! p3 J4 ]( g1 D1 sI’m still filled with fear
$ L% u" P$ p7 w2 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 K6 y- a' f) f; c3 E( C( a* rI regret not dying
0 d. P' u' E2 K! y) k! N# \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 m( P/ [6 L8 w$ MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( G# [2 E0 }) Q# DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 N. E- X1 ~3 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. \  J0 R$ M- v9 R4 {& i1 t( V) B$ i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 v% U& H# C5 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( M% ~& g9 T, n! Y/ c+ J  w& U, D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 f5 H/ w. g% X/ e; b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 T& E3 a* \3 ~2 n& Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% ^% [" _/ i* Q: g8 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* B+ [8 X6 s* q1 r) z, o) z# S6 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 f9 x3 d5 d' s8 d8 A4 {6 }9 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' L) B, r- J" o0 ?  {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* }* [' v% R+ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" d3 l. K" ]5 H6 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 |& y. k! n% B" u3 R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; S4 f5 F/ h& i, g- C, f* X0 X9 v1 _' i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 F1 x& X, H* O5 S1 Z7 S- m, Y1 U8 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 R7 S- D) M# p- A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ?" I; \1 L2 C) i' g0 l" g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% `" q0 e2 }. D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. Q# |7 I9 X/ Q2 N# f2 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  L% H* G3 `- M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# H) J7 i2 v" w8 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# ^- @8 ]/ g, e( h9 N7 Q: i5 o" O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- t9 e3 a5 f- V4 X; f; L! Y$ U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  s( |* J* @/ g" @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 D- ^" o% Z# n0 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  o2 Q- T- s/ V' `- b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ |4 y# w! G5 ~3 q4 z" {<P>I regret not dying</P>
- q; J" S' M) x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 t  G' c, j9 h! R. U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  r& r" s  {( B6 T! C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^  s4 o5 X+ s7 Z' K( K1 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ P7 M, @* v4 H( D' x; c. H8 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ ?6 X: o1 H$ T  w1 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 A8 Z1 p! a! T& L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) }% d- i% u7 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( s2 F' r* {( F0 r: |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 p6 z  r7 K3 l4 A( ]! w6 p! ~我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" N# k( H6 r2 p- i# K4 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>