【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( z* M. Z# t; n$ H/ ^4 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* Q- J+ i: Q# Q! T5 S7 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
! {8 S3 A6 z5 t+ s. Y0 e. MWith the moon kissing it every night
0 S& g3 H* X8 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
- S: I6 ~$ F4 J5 C# UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 Y" T2 S7 o+ _" ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ ^  f4 z% X! ?8 kI love you I love you with all my heart
; ?+ q. V% I  W- m( q1 c" y" hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 C/ d' E0 ]  G2 i. jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 z4 J) b0 L% J( uI want so much to see inside your heart
, L( u4 t, ~8 K) n- F8 B* o1 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% [6 D' c9 \* I% M# k9 AI’m still filled with fear
1 u9 G1 T$ e4 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 v( Y0 @. j' u% b; F% z3 [I regret not dying
& j" i7 w' P1 ?% k7 N  BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 r/ V4 h- l  I% UWith such a tongue as yours,
. M7 ^, V) u) F3 i( [1 _# M& d: {9 c- QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 ^: [5 ^9 G' w9 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% |0 ?  _7 s$ ?2 m' H1 H3 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 G4 p; L6 s2 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( Z( r1 M4 M2 o4 q; Y; @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 y& M8 B3 |4 I$ H) y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 C& S; _9 _4 C% n- a* p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# Q4 O' K9 L: R% g0 d% |7 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; g+ }& c1 v  p" l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! R% s3 {, U/ J" w5 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% X" H# {' F% p/ ~" A5 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" E  i$ L. R: V+ e0 }& ~$ f( Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 T, P4 Z3 t9 Z, q  I: C! q6 g2 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' j8 Q- u* `1 r4 y) E' _0 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 {! c  e5 A( M4 }9 y  {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 d# v; R# h' F4 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' e5 @1 x" [3 u5 \  V# k6 K" a0 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. W) h. k/ _7 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: |2 F2 t9 I: d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; v8 D4 h' T, ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% W, s+ o: q& h8 `" [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  I9 n" p9 W1 @8 w$ Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" v/ Y4 `: ^  b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( a. `+ Z- l$ l2 W0 d" e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) q6 O% ~0 q% @! Y! r, Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. V( S/ ]: {+ @, y. [  Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- \; m8 H3 w3 G/ C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# k4 e4 v% S# P7 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>