【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 N' [1 D6 O. R# @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. \6 [+ h, H( X, T+ K# I0 h/ E( vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ e6 [1 L8 f& l: p9 r, i' a! }The sky is happy down to its soul
9 Y1 @$ {- j* {; }9 |8 ~* I/ zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 |0 R6 C( |1 l! {+ UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( M5 m7 j: D& T1 J+ e9 n" ]1 f7 sEvery other word you utter is love
, ?% `* ]$ b3 x6 G: ]I really want to know just how much you love me
. X7 e7 A+ l9 s. |# c1 `4 T/ |, rI love you I love you with all my heart
: ^$ a2 n6 r( M& K) ?Nothing can compare to my love
2 u3 o3 h* R* W4 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 A" E  ~3 Y3 `8 f% X/ T) gI want so much to see inside your heart
) }% z! D8 z2 Z# @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ]/ y7 t6 s. F+ c8 b) W6 FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% v3 B8 }7 ]0 Q' L* a3 {. T( l( aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) F% j+ T2 }+ y7 u& m% ?With such a tongue as yours,
- X, P5 v+ m; C& k& C% h* C, JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 r; v( M  b; P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" V1 ]% l5 j6 D  V' I+ w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; b' m# F7 v/ u9 ]3 E( ~' L+ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, ?( Y- G) o# d: }+ }2 x6 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 q$ t6 x- V# p3 v  t6 Z. M2 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- ~$ f0 ?7 @( ^* x! }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- f& l, z9 C) O& k' p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 ^: z- w3 e6 G' c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& E* l6 o2 M: R+ y1 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; T; C: G: h/ Y6 R& Q% z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* c  R  s$ p/ u9 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
, v& Y! m9 M1 s4 @& F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& C" _/ w3 d% H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 |4 ]& |8 U9 V( H6 n- u$ p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# c# }  C1 [& M+ d  q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ y" @# `" C% J$ v* y' k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" W3 }& D; s+ B, F. g' I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 w3 ^) r% |4 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* M" Y5 R$ B9 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 h$ ?( w. G5 h7 V: p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 @! W. a2 S7 k; l+ N) F0 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  M6 n; }5 g  x+ ?% b- C) [  z5 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' d( C1 \) v9 X2 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 O) p  f! _1 x# r. }' b8 T* ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# e9 H2 w( G7 g# L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, a- O, q2 o1 T( \# W. D% s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( I9 t  O+ `5 o# F1 v( L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( f6 a9 [9 s% C' v% y, j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 G' v! Y/ Y4 Z( F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 f& ]) }" d* k% v& S/ E. z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>