【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" Y1 A/ g3 |* a8 @1 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 g; Y: V/ t% C" @1 gWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& ^9 W! ~6 R6 q# H4 LI would probably know how you feel
/ N. d& P8 ?. J' \6 |5 r5 OLove… just the word love
/ k" D5 X. q5 V; C. L6 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 E  y$ X) E0 M! H7 W9 N3 `6 aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 `* Y- A' h" s! f' Q  C& U: LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, G3 C7 o2 y* L+ O9 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ T' ~: k6 x, |2 ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% X0 N2 H' u5 k. G! M" V" _9 @I want to confess that I love you,
0 ~5 R  n2 Y9 ?# @& X+ VBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) k! r+ U3 J' J8 c9 H1 r( ZIf today isn’t too late,
2 R1 g, G6 M$ P% MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 n& `0 H3 d2 ~2 lEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! @+ e6 ?5 N+ U/ T) B, ^, H0 a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 E6 i2 B: k% V* J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) _4 h  m# R& t, |/ |2 o7 \  c<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* P' j& I& S+ z. G9 W( I3 ]; ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! q0 t0 l- m$ a; {4 I( H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 v' N( t7 W, _! V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 K. N; J1 e% T2 [3 D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 c$ S- f0 t5 Y& Q2 O7 P! W( W4 O6 _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! F3 L7 N) F- A7 i+ i' }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, G8 [. p4 J) Y& N& `4 ^% p, H: B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" s( U- u& t8 G7 h7 v7 L9 {0 [. ~$ J<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, ?( d& E0 ~" j$ y* R8 M! a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ f* s4 C2 y: P. `5 I1 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 Y( t( v! M" e' z8 e5 g# I! p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" s7 `3 ^2 Z  g* ~: s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 T( j# U2 s3 R( n$ N) O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' _. _$ T8 r: `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  J9 Y: {9 b5 }, J& B5 D- i: _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 b! J' k* M7 ~# I. _& d; E. g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 h; Z" ^1 c, B# u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  d  y7 r" q, r, G4 x7 T* {( k& q) q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 j* T/ T9 ]$ V' r/ o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* V4 B$ ]5 G. v; Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 f3 ~8 J1 D+ C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( H" K, o! `9 _/ q1 B& F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  h( {5 E6 }: o# C/ Z6 r& `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# J( k4 Q" a+ R 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 |" \! C/ o- D& M4 _9 D8 t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 E$ H) s5 f4 @' O% u! x! \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>