【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 I$ @) [" u$ C' @2 b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% [3 C- b6 [' x) d9 P& l& FFrom the first moment we met,
8 ]7 i  t. a+ [( G+ OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  U- |8 |1 X# T8 p! y7 C# BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. T' a  V0 u5 f1 D$ A4 ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% J6 G: z5 G  V( t. R! `/ tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 r7 A- t3 Q% g- T. z- ]If today isn’t too late,
" [1 i, {' {6 W; N9 k% `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; v! ^- P; b& `4 Q$ h4 ZCan I entrust it to you?
7 @2 O" E, ]4 ^Entrust my love within your heart
" q/ v  ?* R  r! nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% T+ n2 F! d0 x& {; X- l; d+ ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 R1 i) H2 G2 f$ FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 e, _2 N" U8 K6 u# jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& x" e5 |  y! o8 `+ ]5 bCan I entrust it to you?
: a  V9 Q$ l, S: A1 T4 H' }Entrust my love within your heart
* V1 k% V# m" ^+ R) [' h  j0 sCan I entrust it to you?
+ C& \# M' G, W7 MEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( l9 a7 s% y, _( ~( r6 o0 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 q8 x% o& e3 C! N* b9 H9 J( L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ x. w7 Q7 j5 s2 r4 B3 c8 s+ Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 E) j" ^" h5 ?" q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( X6 O. p1 f, \" J  e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 b6 ~6 }3 l1 Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  W' B; X0 Z. X& _3 |% I! S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  A/ H6 O+ _+ @: A0 V! L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, j2 ^; R# l8 ~& k) s) Z5 V7 r8 z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 j" p7 X  o  \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* K2 B% W9 e% R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 ^5 _+ \5 H" U$ L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 Q2 b# y4 A6 H9 S; |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 Y2 W/ Z* C3 B0 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- g5 x3 X1 O0 Y1 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( ?- S+ U7 p9 L! @8 ^- H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 ^" n% c! O2 s! k+ b* Q) E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- G5 {4 u1 G* y, Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- S( m$ L7 B4 }2 b4 z% X# b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 i+ n/ M% D4 b2 T1 u/ c5 h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& X( `# I9 R7 a; p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 x, P4 B# r8 h. d2 w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. W: }9 S# D5 O  Y( N4 R  A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 y, d/ V' [  c/ z3 B& P$ K- h' C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 ?* U) X! ], K7 w/ }; x+ W' k- N! v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ E9 e1 r4 J/ Y/ }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 D, l  A4 p4 A, C. c8 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 o- `) D3 Z$ u. B6 O8 c- N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- S+ i/ F, K+ }5 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! k5 m9 h! E5 p" x/ T  P7 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' Y' J9 E% F( e% H5 l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 y8 a6 \$ Q, v. W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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