【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* F/ O4 N5 y( _: R1 x8 [* i0 \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, J$ w# ~5 g# B$ }7 OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 C1 X  p! E! V% x- rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 r3 q! ]/ r* p3 N& dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! s! E5 X; m! D. _$ V: ~6 n6 T: II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, d- C, x9 u* I! v( M  ~5 @If today isn’t too late,
( R) d% y2 G( d" {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 h" ^7 u, d/ k' [; ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 p7 }  _/ M/ w; z. Q. @+ ULove… just the word love
' k; _% D  |1 M! ~/ U+ R/ e7 L# ~Why is it so difficult to express?
' ]% K8 E) q3 f% II want to confess that I love you,
8 i% ^4 B! i6 O: M+ J; bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 H' V$ l% [2 |* b/ F! n1 c8 e2 Q. fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 o2 g- \! X5 j$ {! GCan I entrust it to you?
1 \, W7 f' j6 xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ t/ b* e7 l, b$ N* XEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, t+ V) R* D+ P/ P$ i5 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, e* R( H. o7 Q! X% J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 L+ b+ D% f7 A' h) p" j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& D5 P6 s- O4 T2 F5 @1 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! ~# A! H. K/ a5 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" o! f; y: y" t+ h- O: S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 Y: i9 T. B1 x: N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& W7 n) \- }( e$ W: v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: a# l0 h$ r. P- b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ J& V( l1 k# X( }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% ^( J/ J+ w1 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  }; l; l' \( |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 }: x6 O- K( S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# ]/ [! u8 H5 l& o: e% [9 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ b5 z. y! s# p& a+ L9 ]0 n& s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ x* S2 j" g8 P- S& y3 A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 U+ h, y: O) f+ I+ e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 N3 k. v$ z5 k8 P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ W8 O) w! ]2 s9 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. X1 w) U6 n8 w. Z4 Z" r( {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: [, I8 G  z+ I4 e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 o+ ]* ?2 ]" p4 b* v  P2 u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 u% C4 b& ~$ c2 D: p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 m7 j5 U( h2 C, U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% [! s% w# q% i" q# l7 ^  a, ?* H$ q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ V2 B- @- l% ^1 U: T8 c$ k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. T* `0 C" t; {# G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) B& i- h8 _; B1 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ |" ?) j6 v0 _1 C; D: f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- A" v! V+ g6 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 q% T+ V+ @2 o* a1 K4 P: |) C6 {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 H7 Q, K& A) ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; d' x2 `( f! G6 M! `2 q- P+ |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ E: M, _& I! y- K9 l# h* V# q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>