【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" M3 j0 n# n0 r- l! _9 \我另将歌词附在此。
* Z. C6 Y# U( k& y. B! aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( `+ m3 ]' O  a' LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 r" d8 h* D4 ]( p  z: R6 N* j0 BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 |3 R! F+ E3 Y" L* `$ |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( B. Y/ n% X! L: q% OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. p! }& s( y! f! D9 lIf today isn’t too late,
0 `, S! m' ~1 M! D& J0 v4 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' m/ W' N. a5 Z+ y4 y$ eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& w3 `) p7 \) r9 w* L( UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' _, ^( z8 [& s' K- ^. n* G+ l+ pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 F( g7 ~/ e& H6 z" EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  v9 P; d2 v! R4 ^2 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ U1 Z- z( k6 {6 m. WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" o5 ?1 b$ H$ Q$ w0 M% \Can I entrust it to you?
0 u- s, _$ {5 s# Q; k7 E1 D9 FEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# H7 P9 J" C( L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. i" ?$ C1 z1 k$ ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 J4 s& N1 }/ J) \* Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& r# J2 Z, G  O1 H- |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 M! Q# {( V6 V( ~& c1 q+ v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ L# X+ C) N2 R3 ]4 h' x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# z3 l$ J1 U6 T  }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 _+ C& F& d, ]$ L1 c* f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 u# i( [8 y) e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( L5 p* _  x( \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: G# n0 Q0 t% q# c. j4 h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 D" t3 B5 \  {9 ^; {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ X$ |  B0 Q' O* [: R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ Y/ ]& }9 p: ^9 S! N% P3 L" `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- q' i7 x9 E) e+ G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 O( }! ?$ ^9 P4 S7 L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' g" {9 z! x$ r4 N4 F" t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 f7 y* C; z3 h' C* e' J1 P<P>But I never did </P>
3 q2 [; ]/ T  e2 I" @/ C<P>但我不会 </P>
) f8 K. b" f! O% ^: `0 K/ c) p& d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( [0 M/ }6 j. t) i8 [, t, d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 J/ T* @7 z4 n/ C, M4 d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, D) S# P; p1 Z7 r* b/ U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ \  Z! v, O1 R& j8 N% w1 c, ]1 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 a) V$ G- M1 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" c+ Y$ r5 d! R3 ~8 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  x( N3 E- Y! z6 x* B0 d8 O/ r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 o0 m; f/ U% J% c' e% o2 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 c  Y; Q: x: p9 h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- `  q, @& n( N% e3 ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>