【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; A4 y3 _, b+ M5 {4 H我另将歌词附在此。
& w( N' K8 K6 r# J$ T. LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 f  E. C- b+ h6 E* bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% u# U7 B' X( u  ~9 M/ tFrom the first moment we met,
( J% g6 f- \8 {4 O# WI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 W& D! O8 ^$ y: \! L. E7 BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# B. W+ y! ]' o6 e. ~2 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ ^, Q- Z5 s% e8 N/ ~5 C1 @1 W1 {4 @6 jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. j) D* L5 j1 x$ ]" I5 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! l5 j1 U( b! O+ TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 j. {5 ?: y2 ]" e6 ^: i2 `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, _8 j1 n0 T- Y, Y$ |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. k) i# g5 b8 f/ R/ U9 A2 t& nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  g( \% D& o2 E% t6 JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! R9 p, `9 |( S9 f<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% X! J6 u  [8 w/ O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* s) n1 e7 X1 A8 l5 V4 s; Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 t2 p9 i6 N. D: q) c  Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( {) C& e! v+ D' Y, O' j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  r* |* S# b. p8 `: h9 O5 d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. a2 a# I; d: \  a8 q  j  N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 O4 T1 M9 A+ V5 @! e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 |9 Q6 {( o6 ^/ Q( M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# Z# f8 ~6 {% E. E9 n7 @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: M( R  q4 t- }8 a% ]' H" H$ ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& h/ q9 G, [- y  y3 d- N& ^' |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ M( \, K) j  R0 }4 k, q) ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% |3 \, I) q7 H9 y  C" b, c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, i: O  L/ ~. ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- c$ G3 C$ b" Y9 a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  g8 x4 G( v8 L. ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 w" E) `' |7 l0 T0 L6 p9 X# `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ R5 y" }5 r- J5 K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 h; S1 i$ X, n8 \$ i) A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. L+ o" _, _$ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 y2 |! q) V4 s8 ]/ L& |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  l' J8 |" n: g+ H  ?. k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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# l2 L  x5 `+ ]  O! l9 w1 }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 \# {  P& G' k, o% i2 d% ]0 X( X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>