【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' C4 @3 F  q" ^' v# p我另将歌词附在此。
6 ~  @& P/ i6 X/ i: F( j) sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; x* ^" Q# J3 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 S% m9 q% ]* `5 tI already loved you with all my heart
/ G7 f1 q( w  nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 m  ?( N) W7 Y* w! XI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 e4 V% j8 `/ ^" x6 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
. M9 v5 M) ^- g1 m; EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ X' ~2 ]( ^4 u# x, zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; F+ z* |- T' _  z- h0 N# Y9 F, L, iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 W& V' u' g8 |4 a! b$ Y& xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! e& t* O- F8 d- e# xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& r$ [, h: i4 o$ k/ _4 I$ VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 J* o) j. l+ q  t$ _# C6 s$ c! x0 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ [! J6 H6 I- a9 @5 DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ F$ u! |3 E- ?! N+ z$ \" Q" }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  a0 M. r# N, D0 z' @- P# P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 s6 X/ w2 Y  e4 V; k0 k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. U) [6 o, N8 ?$ I; f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 e- @8 V+ Q1 \; b2 v6 P+ B! k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* `9 b1 j% b2 g4 Y7 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ A  ]+ }5 y- s0 z# Q9 m+ v  X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 W: G; n9 z  P" m' w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ K3 q- t! F. u0 l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 b4 ?8 _! ^' ]9 s: x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- |0 P- l+ y: E5 t3 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ t9 i. W  u1 [; A# M, q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& d$ r6 d* I, i+ z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- P, z4 ?  r$ u! Q0 I) [6 d8 l" \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 h8 z% o' V/ H" a6 H: l+ J. p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" o! \2 d4 S! ^$ P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- [2 X- E2 ~$ @$ o+ r/ g# j: ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, [) f8 Q2 b9 Q5 [: Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: ]3 z/ |( ^! H8 N: e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 W$ w! m: F0 ^6 g8 ^3 _* I4 U7 \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) Q/ Z; v1 ~  M# O0 u  O' Y4 m<P>但我不会 </P>
. Q9 W  x1 t% Q  r, H4 l+ o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! n  t; U$ [* @( m' x% N" {, T: f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ X2 X* r# X' L  e' c* h# K7 s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# @& e) H7 f1 Y  B( u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& I# m9 [  |( I8 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; ]. n/ B0 q  Z& l& z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 o. m* m7 Y! J" j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! z3 q) [$ j! H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  j: ]7 t- U$ H5 c* ~2 `- b! k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' \# L/ r+ U4 v) v" S3 G% t3 z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ]) C$ _, Y! N- e* J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>