【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, L: @1 r9 T, d  J( zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 z# \  i' |- QI already loved you with all my heart
3 Y6 \: ^* z5 EWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; M/ i) Q9 p' P3 ?) N5 F0 pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' o. k% l8 ]& {. X. `, W/ ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ]* z8 f9 e; L! mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: K2 b4 W1 N6 D9 w( {1 C2 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- h& A& j, I+ ?+ ^3 D- j9 U8 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  M# K) N; c( x3 X, `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 T0 J- \0 {5 t9 }  LI want to confess that I love you,
0 X  x+ ~! x8 BBut I never did
' p1 i- W7 Z, g# I2 [- _, [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 F5 Y+ Q& m: o! v2 a9 H4 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 K4 A  r1 [- ~. q; u  f) UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# b+ M: w& e; K3 WEntrust my love within your heart

, \1 j  O9 l& K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ @/ ~0 c5 {8 I1 E! [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 _# D2 q9 r* G9 h1 o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 e1 v1 X* g8 c* p. s% w3 h- k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 G+ N. a! F7 n1 Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 t1 E; V! m, |$ n  e1 @: l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& l8 s2 R8 W) t- {3 `* i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 A% ^  e0 Z" J$ u1 W' ~( Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- Q% a( e, Z$ ]0 C, K  H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, y: E6 K/ ?+ H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. I2 U( L  o: ]% M2 `: A: Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ \  K9 l, G- B$ z) f# N0 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: r" E7 t2 K# `) H7 D/ Z  x1 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" H3 o/ X5 m: h' Y+ i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, j/ p% i2 ~# c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% U1 y* l5 k6 @9 @5 c( l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# [3 s4 g7 i7 ?$ V* m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ p* S5 u8 Y8 E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! }4 ?) I5 r2 p, b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( t9 U* }3 n/ G5 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 r' z) k; l9 y  e; _( f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  Y+ \9 B& Q5 ?* y# @) M$ R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 c& E& C3 T5 V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ W. P* s1 W* j& v. ?  X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* E5 x2 F3 A% f9 T9 d8 \/ F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. u, ?! U& V+ i1 ^) D6 |& r- n" P1 E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, e" x7 b  I9 w2 p: f<P>But I never did </P>
( T" m, K& g( ^<P>但我不会 </P>
" q+ i6 r  L5 U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ E' ]2 {: E( B3 B, I0 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 S8 R" @8 V# H$ Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 E" {1 U  n, P' G" ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 J5 M& g$ X/ ]1 H$ q, l# E7 {, o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 S, T3 w) D' J8 j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* _  D: V& Q0 E% s- a) M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: F1 S/ t- Y7 I5 R! L, J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>