【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
, A( E7 R, Z: g4 T, S$ SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 E* \1 ]- o2 d% r( \# wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ |8 E/ t1 {: ]) XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ C7 z- K% u" bLove… just the word love
" j5 i' Z& Q  [. [7 _) mWhy is it so difficult to express?
  R1 s( l; i' O2 hI want to confess that I love you,
8 u; `# f* P9 Y2 N/ h- [0 ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( c/ j  Z" h  N0 H; n. Q9 bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: P& \5 f* M3 C; }, j2 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- u( s* N$ _) u8 H% @I want to confess that I love you,
/ }) s0 \# ]* e2 V( {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: G9 _3 V' S7 o( p1 WIf today isn’t too late,
6 L' S0 ?+ R9 e% h8 u3 `- XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! @# D$ a# t0 K$ u2 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 v. d& Q% K% s' jEntrust my love within your heart
  |2 `  ^: L: ~4 W- `! V2 FCan I entrust it to you?
- T/ |/ f; o. n6 T8 P1 N6 x: |Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 G9 Y2 D7 A9 }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 T1 u% T' \5 O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 j8 G5 X; J% j6 z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 w! x9 O; I3 Q4 i# \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% Z+ T5 `! }! C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 o1 a+ k1 H& c0 n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 a0 v6 `% M8 ~9 ]9 ^' i+ f- _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& }1 I# o2 O  [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, G2 _6 R4 X# B$ {0 s+ A5 l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: }; [( T9 F0 k/ N6 v; ]; g# g  _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 O: \- j" m8 s" o2 Y+ X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) L3 n# h3 M, `5 J4 R; U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& K2 W3 ?7 O" Z5 ?. l+ \4 A$ N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# }- Q3 ~# D) O+ c4 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% l  I$ `# K  e; X2 U4 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 O* A) E% x' a7 l; I1 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ l9 C$ K- i0 j& T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; @$ s6 |, V0 V+ W3 r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( ]7 Q: [6 ]4 g  U/ B<P>但我不会 </P>
; i# g- x, ?3 r2 f% G) D4 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 i& A! s2 z, h' {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) J. z3 X6 ~; H/ S8 C5 Q# d" [& _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 p* o; h1 E; A  b+ x3 }1 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 e! n7 C! ]2 o" J2 J6 H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 ^) B5 G( K* I& c% O7 P" x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>