【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, I5 {$ ~8 b5 B  d& JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ J0 C/ k, O; g5 kI already loved you with all my heart
' L1 _& o; n3 uWe meet and talk everyday,
- _# ~. K' e+ e& j# v) s: }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& A6 W  K' H4 ]7 i: X. B0 yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ g2 N/ U' t! ^9 S2 b  oLove… just the word love
0 H- c2 [$ ^* O4 j/ ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 B: Q* r! S- ?5 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  P  R& L7 X6 x$ sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ Y1 d6 Y5 v/ G! z9 k0 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' ?6 T3 H, p9 y# N' sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( \( ?& m6 {2 z# ]! _9 nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 y3 I6 H$ H& k4 L0 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 E0 U1 n8 f7 _# BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% O4 A7 k) G6 d, q* G4 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ }; W$ ~4 B  f8 C1 }" U/ k$ A7 [Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. O; O* L: y4 i; F8 q: S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- a, {5 V" \  a0 M0 x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# y3 P; K! i2 X- d+ X. ^5 `+ t3 \- \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  l. }  _. G. f4 B; W/ N% O- ?* K" L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* T) x0 p# c8 v6 \. s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 V0 S3 E& k+ C# e2 H8 Y' |. n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 T# T6 @" y4 o. Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ \% c9 t: |5 k+ }- w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' F+ Z' n) j! |8 T  m  E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( B# ?% Y$ g- \6 V6 x  R0 d: ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. V$ G4 U; ~( e. k, @7 e8 l/ W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" ^) w( L3 g5 J( U' g6 ^% J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" h6 Z( Y9 r! A! `; r4 f/ N6 c* I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. J- n- `1 P2 ]6 J/ {; [7 `8 s8 d5 }% h  s<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  Q* {6 P& y% J1 D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ c" ?* R5 p0 T3 y4 M0 T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 V: B* D& A  R5 p4 E4 g<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 l9 a; s% v. j9 j3 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) s  l2 [9 w$ S# Q9 X" J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ X* D8 y, a& T/ c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% K/ \; g7 o. ~" n! o; D2 W" O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 a  J4 a4 }! p5 W" |" m1 L( ]7 ^5 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; @$ X/ ?  H) U1 S2 F. F6 @+ s% w/ L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# h+ }1 T) Z2 Y& T: c; P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 ?7 s9 n. J- |/ \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* q, {8 V8 D% j8 ~' V: j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>