【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


1 V. T- |6 b$ x. O2 Z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 n* S7 Q, K2 ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 Z+ s% P' q9 ~4 {9 k1 \From the first moment we met,
. z% F. ?; q& n: b$ h/ V8 [9 mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ x6 ?% N; t+ z- u$ h9 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 G3 N5 |5 w, o! \I would probably know how you feel
4 O! E+ Y! b' Y3 zLove… just the word love
/ a$ Q" E0 M# }# E1 ]0 o  h% `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 y% a8 a3 D+ s2 \% {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 C$ y/ u( I5 r# ^If today isn’t too late,
. ]' f+ X8 i) TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 U! t6 j0 D+ CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& i: N' G+ y& m, u( Z, f7 ICan I entrust it to you?
) h. n6 \) H2 M7 h# n  ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 A& J7 E2 z1 n' S) ~Why is it so difficult to express?
* A. u& _  @) T8 L1 jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 N" b7 s# ]1 W( w1 MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 B( {) I9 j' h) y/ dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 e6 M( H8 `, J4 KCan I entrust it to you?
/ t- K' g9 H8 U! B. @Entrust my love within your heart
( i" @( R0 ^* T8 b6 M
- g  j7 S  B6 E7 z) q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 {& n9 s$ S( n' T8 b. W$ \
6 e/ k$ N, C- @9 \7 g7 C# K) c, G' M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ U) q0 j; I& P" l. _- {7 o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 m7 a) A) Y% a5 s4 y7 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 A5 s& {3 z8 z: ^3 b* j) }0 O; C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( [' N7 |9 H# o3 H5 g& o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 I% T) t/ _$ Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 U" `/ m1 `3 M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. [- A0 z4 l! k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' l& A, q, N& h- B& ]% {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 ?; B, f  `6 x/ U8 z; V! W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  }" V' n4 ?; @( q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; x& j2 l+ K& R3 a( ?0 i; v9 r+ H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 R% w& V6 E) W7 k- s2 o: I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 T( \1 f, }7 Z( M% E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ p. h$ F2 C& i4 \. ^/ \# K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ C3 ]& K# l- ^3 ~+ ~! p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- Z7 _" q% {2 c# s; P" F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 S* |" J& `9 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. D3 x, c9 B* i2 ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% q+ p  R6 u6 c' ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& Q; @& k3 U3 D: F' G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" e! Z4 O# r2 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 z# T8 k; G! [6 e; o4 R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ |. @+ O; Q  H/ F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! c4 t2 @' s# f# I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 N" ?' r  N3 [8 Q+ Q0 _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 U# @- x# R- D" a) f+ F2 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 k7 U) z. ~3 s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
# i* C5 n0 E& Q
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

0 H0 v3 Z" _% w2 F<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
/ X: V/ I* F' Q% }; y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>