【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
9 V& \9 S1 I, C5 D) BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ h8 |! {+ A% @/ {: a' WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 C& v. I: H5 [1 k& @" p& A" QFrom the first moment we met,
& F$ [# u; R! }; p* S( n2 H  oI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" S3 F1 |6 y& y8 S$ L) vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; Y! b- F/ P" E  M- K8 VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# U) W, S0 o. O$ ~- S7 rIf today isn’t too late,
9 \. c+ S; }) h: S  ~2 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 r9 m& q8 X5 G- _3 o* JCan I entrust it to you?
# N* o- l9 c9 P; y4 G% ^Entrust my love within your heart
. \; y% c$ _, n" A. D4 M0 [0 ~. jLove… just the word love
( l2 L" x$ }/ J" ~1 D( v  MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 H: X2 o( r( m6 \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( U! |9 B! O& O! w' C/ u. rEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- Q; _, c1 @7 KEntrust my love within your heart
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! a$ D' G- {9 z; ~5 x! b5 O! ^8 q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' f9 ?& R7 S  ^& N( G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# v1 X4 T9 |3 y) q) x0 `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- M1 i+ s5 V: r6 r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, w) n* ~5 \% s- i# ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( p, X8 x. E* ^; a* T6 Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' b( e2 O' R$ z' ]0 f& \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 \/ h5 u2 S/ i+ u6 _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ m9 c& w0 h, Z8 v  O/ v# f, q' f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ]' }' h" t0 j% y. Q- P# k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; W- a, i; v" r, r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 n8 [6 g. y% [9 ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 ]" C  k3 E3 D  q# _. ]# j2 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% d+ V8 w; A3 k+ F' ~2 t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& s0 w1 ^% I3 g/ G  Q. R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 I# I% Q7 E2 k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. o& z: X3 q/ g2 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. o" V/ n% x* A8 {0 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, @4 E; @- A$ m0 H. p+ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) _& \. D# [+ S( V. Q, B9 \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 ^; `- F5 y' B# [1 {1 P7 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 o7 i+ G' X. L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: `/ p# w- E' b4 d9 ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; v* }! ?' L4 c* f+ ^( U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  Y0 V3 h1 Q, p' n  q<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" p9 J% F7 j4 ]- }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 g! U# N* [- B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 l7 K) S$ s! f6 k. L. @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" D+ R9 ]1 J9 T8 L2 X+ x( i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; z# ~: H" [( X6 [* k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ n- G, s( l) e  S, g- v* V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ p4 y4 G) g$ W  c+ y* l/ a2 S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  b% n1 @9 F# Z% ~# |5 t+ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" v" V. ]. x: g. M$ m3 F4 O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' _% I. u4 w4 y/ N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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; ^/ ?/ t7 P+ t& ], h3 B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 l& p( u" C2 v2 E5 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>