【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 c" O/ K" [/ {, F* `' X我另将歌词附在此。
, P! K$ U3 b. x' hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* E7 E2 l3 B9 gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& k+ R0 R% @1 l, L3 f) FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 y# o9 v. B& DI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 Y$ p  `8 o- l" n, ~Why is it so difficult to express?
/ q. S1 R4 w/ W. A8 w& V5 CI want to confess that I love you,
7 h0 N$ _2 Y" o9 {2 MBut I never did
* P+ S! l0 Z' t- u% r' S6 T- jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 _2 J" K6 U% X6 N" w- X* LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. J7 f, w  }8 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 R% r, H8 K+ L# _6 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 t( o9 ?: |/ \- h2 sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: `# u# w3 f5 L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 T4 R6 c( Y; K2 X2 w- z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! U3 F! {/ }/ R  `5 T, [6 t. `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! c# s! q- E+ a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 `+ z# o/ N2 \% n% x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 `$ j+ ^4 G7 m  U' I  i3 ]( t4 a' |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; X" G3 u: V* D# q* r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 `7 W* C8 i- _; A# \9 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- Y- e4 m' ~6 ?6 ~! D/ Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& H1 {% w0 O# S% ^8 K; P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 l, c" b# g  U) z" f$ e1 k5 R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) M& I7 S, a/ M+ v* q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 L1 G- `$ @4 c' h3 Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! S9 p0 p/ N( x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( s: T' t0 Y/ m) _8 _. B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% Q0 y" z+ v) i4 _! y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 z5 b- ^7 v, m6 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 m3 M& l6 p5 ~9 h) v3 c: z: `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. m  i$ r) r- @# C3 g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 M- e, b  c! I9 Y9 j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& z/ S' ^9 `% V- X/ ^. E  n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. {; V4 k. X( F$ p) i% F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ S) P  m7 ^1 L/ {+ x1 _, g6 l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 |6 E3 v6 X$ I8 i/ [2 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, M9 g" r& P# c( h* S4 m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 B0 H; |: Q: b, t: g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  W' |0 x$ z5 T: _$ M& f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" I+ w: v- D4 l9 i1 s3 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 e/ _/ H6 ]; _& K0 U+ w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, V! k. }) a9 }8 x1 g* J9 ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>