【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
$ D, ^: v5 j. t) pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 ~9 O' i. J0 B2 V* U/ y3 u; I% _3 uFrom the first moment we met,
8 T8 ]- p0 z6 t7 L0 i" |I already loved you with all my heart
' X' k7 j8 w+ F4 R  q5 _2 IWe meet and talk everyday,
! E( |2 V6 U8 y( h* `! J+ J7 SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 _7 ~% r0 p* _1 c7 ^I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ ^, ]& M6 c: T/ R& mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 p+ r9 N' M% s) \1 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, f# ~2 z# f: {' [+ hIf today isn’t too late,
" J& M4 E1 J/ z1 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! n" C6 T/ `' O, v- ~1 h7 cCan I entrust it to you?
" B: u) u, d2 f6 x5 b$ w" M  i* mEntrust my love within your heart
% P* }* o2 b4 `. \: P6 D" E! nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) B1 f. E3 m& \* P1 ]7 `But I never did
" L! ~9 D& A0 m) [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 x/ u9 K& Q5 c; ]3 WIf today isn’t too late,
% H5 x# x$ Q& c* b" L. z6 a. }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- I! _) t( d: V' O$ O8 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; c5 R8 {4 [7 k3 @* j$ m, l. y3 e  NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ n* s1 z6 P  xCan I entrust it to you?
* E. ~1 H  d7 z* {Entrust my love within your heart

6 ^5 Z; H, B. F# L7 f/ k! y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 t4 N& p4 C" `+ |1 L7 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% q: |! W" @4 l  l7 ~. q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: Y) O* U3 H0 d: N$ `7 V* C6 t, f* s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; J/ \1 o$ r# [2 E% ^; r& X# n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" x! K% ?% z8 I! ?<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) }8 U' X, N& K( h5 Q" I  j1 X% ?7 d, I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 K( ?$ f' E& P+ \; U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 E' t# q: q& M" w7 A6 A4 X% }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; g' ^" K6 }. b( G! V% R' [<P>但我不会</P>
. J3 ]0 X" J4 a9 j- W& t) k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 ]  M; D1 J6 m9 n0 r2 n* [& e- p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  E' v, Q: X% K- U8 c5 `3 Z* s& {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( A, }) E2 L2 c" ]% {4 F) ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  z1 ?% n: H* C: {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 Z7 C# Z5 h. Y, s5 E. m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; E& J+ H8 R: B+ d# I% [1 }7 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 y( Y7 c* O& ?# U- P, {/ |4 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" f9 ^% m- `3 O6 }$ V7 M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# k8 G9 L) ?' u' p<P>但我不会 </P>
0 `, `1 s7 e8 V2 `5 x6 o: B* B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 G9 p& b6 T5 ]5 F& T  {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: m6 P6 u" P9 t8 G" d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ p$ a# C5 s, I3 R+ K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 O0 ^0 z; q2 j1 s% W- T' k5 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 `* w1 l5 ~: m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% x  ^) h" h$ O  }, E6 n9 [: v" X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ s; Z" r! j" b9 v. q5 [8 e. A, B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 z1 k5 ^3 I' B1 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 E- T0 v5 b6 M* Y( R1 F( [1 P& k& D* Z
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 ]) e3 W* y- Q, F) J) |/ ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' \3 {$ C+ b+ g; v# t) _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>