【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; e8 B/ e( B. T7 f& @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ C5 |2 A7 K' o1 l( \% t" L/ bFrom the first moment we met,
% L) ]( r0 X) D+ @3 ]" \I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ ?/ Q9 H' `+ Y2 }+ P' Q9 d+ WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, ]4 V1 ?* f+ G4 PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* f( ^1 `5 L7 m7 f  m" o3 r7 @I would probably know how you feel
9 e" Q- c- E" [! h8 V% d+ e" zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% l- R) o" y: ^7 w0 z+ DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 v9 i5 b3 Q. O0 }; d% v8 v; OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ G  {6 r9 V, @% _% s; |  O% {9 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 a! }, j: X: NWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 b* X  ?2 Q3 y5 [6 VI want to confess that I love you,
/ F/ m3 e/ V2 I# [) iBut I never did
% q1 ?1 h) k5 F& S5 m+ Z, eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 k+ J0 X7 D8 q8 fIf today isn’t too late,
5 e% v2 i1 q, ?' b5 [' OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  V& ~( s* _8 m9 a0 u% d4 h# R) XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 W6 s. Q9 {, k+ r- t4 S7 p, DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# i+ h7 C) c, ]2 J8 `( z+ t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# u. z6 x7 F8 Y" {% o# \) ~5 x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 k( o+ i1 F5 y* L4 m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; b5 O7 r$ R6 v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  q- Y0 B3 h4 d! t9 D3 Z& \# g& v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" I0 [* R" Z( \  Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ i' g4 b- z  Q* x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 S6 n9 j, f; O/ b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ K  H3 ~/ t$ @+ V1 l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 z, q1 W- l4 ]1 k" K5 c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  _& |" Z! [8 n  Z5 w  {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% A" `4 `/ \7 ?4 h. h$ Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 p6 c; H# ]0 Q2 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 D  M# n) k; s4 h, P+ e: I5 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 j/ r; r. i8 W2 G, Z, v) u7 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 P9 L+ {; I' {9 j! ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 j( u, |0 o7 w0 U1 v5 t0 M4 @/ }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, C7 f& l$ y. T# c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: Z3 s# `% V4 U, ~: ]; \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; c5 w  |- T0 b$ J/ ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 A. P- L7 D- H7 f( H, `# l% |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( B8 }+ s2 m9 q' z3 f4 W<P>But I never did </P>
, Z$ m8 a. K8 Q! F$ J% r<P>但我不会 </P>
' m8 g0 C2 K, Q, k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 m4 p; e: j% d9 b- e4 G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" `3 }! d' i) o+ J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- v. d! d& c9 l5 T7 M+ H8 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 b. v0 q5 ?, e+ Y8 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 P6 C) T) Z* k; n, D* X/ }7 w# }2 c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 W4 a/ M, P$ N1 a1 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: k% F2 f/ M" j! h* [1 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 L# L0 z2 x: t; r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  l' Y7 T  k: u& c6 {+ u1 ^" }+ \; e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- p" {: D- j' b" V; [; b4 @. X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>