【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# B. A* B5 g" U6 Y3 K( O; Z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' I' v9 O4 k$ g1 o; D& T' Z1 JFrom the first moment we met,
# ~" x) d. B' l, Z" k$ m0 M0 Q' G/ Q9 F* LI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 m5 A3 A/ H; QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 f6 Z5 m! O# m: aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 [0 Q6 N' V0 X5 H  ?' `$ u8 uI want to confess that I love you,
8 @* |& J  ]" Z( r4 dBut I never did
( T  X4 Q' _( wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' X2 q  w0 F1 ?' {( U: VIf today isn’t too late,
( q% {& a/ m8 e2 n3 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% G' B$ B* X4 y3 w7 CCan I entrust it to you?
" c; T3 V+ h1 U3 J' BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( V! ~9 ?" [1 z5 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 x9 o1 `3 g3 Q# jBut I never did
6 L$ R& ~0 |% ^0 H% P. D* TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 v' Z. l# E( @. iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! |* k$ ?; h; j' I! gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& N9 G# S% }9 b8 l% q7 i1 q+ A4 zCan I entrust it to you?
. I2 ?% i. o% v6 ^Entrust my love within your heart
! y, K% P% B, e% a0 e7 BCan I entrust it to you?
. Y( `' Y  R; V9 x, JEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ \, U& [/ ?1 e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# S) k9 t3 W% @- h& }! y% n/ s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- @, O. h2 s0 `1 [8 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: G7 v6 }+ V# d2 N' ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ I! _8 U: A, U( I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  {+ ]+ |' k7 s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- M7 {% P5 H: Q* ]3 l+ R. a3 N; T, j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; J& O6 b) H: U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) Q% M0 a, ~4 V. E/ I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% p: e' S, U3 ]) C$ i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( o4 b5 e' F8 C" a$ i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ m$ t1 o) M5 [* u3 p! W; c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. H; B' z; D5 k9 B5 d8 `: p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ z/ h- u, D* Q) C6 N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ T, C# G; B1 t7 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; j3 ]0 v8 n  G5 a5 ]3 A# O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 ]3 L9 ?3 O) n( A1 c0 f5 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ ^' J7 m9 e1 n2 k% p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" ]' `/ K$ _% H! M8 E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' ?) I" b  U3 x3 p7 L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 D7 o4 A: \- U( j+ [8 P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% f% y+ z5 `9 \) H/ b2 h; l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& R1 L+ P% {2 K/ D  F3 a0 m1 [2 E- w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 r# ~# d( U/ N2 |6 h% U6 @' G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  \) L  ~$ L5 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 S+ e2 |$ w$ `; n2 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: ]- A7 ^1 Y  a: G% l. N5 r5 g2 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 E# r: ]& b2 p3 h# q9 r. X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 H+ R. X% Q: h/ r1 b5 |, ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 ~4 z5 G5 h: t$ w0 _9 t( z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>