【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( k+ G5 G; ^, w% e$ }9 G: z& f# T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: c8 I& z1 M. |% bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 s$ ]+ y4 `6 k" AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) L1 g- V& `$ _5 l6 T8 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
" l; }8 Y1 ]" B) P, x  r+ G8 KWith the moon kissing it every night
& C9 K2 [, o/ z( C1 K" \+ W2 f; lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( {, d3 L8 A5 u: I% H1 ]6 ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, [8 {7 q' L& pI really want to know just how much you love me
5 p. s) N* ?! S# |7 Q$ d( u1 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- Y5 [: f/ H% [) qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 y/ }5 U. \2 p9 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' L/ ]8 b1 T- h8 q/ w1 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ^* }$ g) K! Q; M. sWith such a tongue as yours,
8 L; m8 V' _" y6 q0 y: V' J6 X, cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ~( r, G  \) S; T9 [! wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 T$ w. ^, m' P. h* v) W% D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ _" z  H6 P% |- s8 q0 C6 O! K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Q0 A6 w5 S; N$ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 F2 |5 A4 u* z# S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 R! |4 W( E1 Q5 x) E0 o' q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# Y6 z( z, [% |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! w( u' m' V/ e+ H) w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: H4 U" Z' Q1 w! I0 X) w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( @+ v0 y# q& G+ ]: ]4 n* Y/ _9 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) s: u* c6 C0 f7 i( k$ ]4 }6 L' ~/ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) t. f5 ?- R9 d' [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: a. H4 I8 x; C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: c; G/ `' }  I0 z  Q; I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' J4 C' G& w/ B$ w2 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" H# c: Y% |4 ?7 I6 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 p. V  {% P0 f, @1 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! }' b( C! K" d( J/ e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" ^3 h; c: }! }  `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ y, k; t- g7 j, j1 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  x( [8 w: E+ p6 \% L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ?/ j& ~: k% k# m; G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- ]. P& U# O, c# W; V: Y, M  u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ?  y; u( c2 Y' N1 V3 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) p; j: W; A, w5 J3 f- g5 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! H& _" ^2 F% `* s  n; q: i# h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 s' D' d" J* n! T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! S. b3 T% J5 R! ]- f, w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 w$ h) I6 F) G4 u3 ^& V5 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- V. U2 @* j9 L4 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 M8 i1 u$ y' ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>