【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 d0 m  L; v- q3 I5 jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( L# z4 D2 `9 U( N1 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 S* l. e' }7 _" P6 `! pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 J: J1 O3 t( q& N7 h. X" H' BYou needn’t fear anything
) ]4 m- \4 i6 Q, {$ F# ?. ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 {3 j# s. R2 G4 n' w& xEvery other word you utter is love
7 W- X) w4 P4 O5 Q/ ?) gI really want to know just how much you love me
2 B" l, r' R3 oI love you I love you with all my heart
- Z7 j( A$ L: x; O! {! u3 yNothing can compare to my love
0 O. b# H! ]) z, d8 [' gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 k( p& z1 w5 h8 r% [, s; |6 PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ E# W1 F3 R9 s8 v& |/ mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, J4 J9 G7 P6 b% a/ j9 L( NI regret not dying
3 S9 ~7 K# Y: X$ p& ?7 q# }3 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ n  v5 f: K. n. p4 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  M" h' e3 ]0 P# x1 j: N0 Z2 I: K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ d: H3 \' ~0 X5 c, x5 W! {) d5 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 D! b* q0 [* _5 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( c0 R. P/ f% h' N! }. n% N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  d' A( d9 r+ A+ ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, g3 v, V" s  U! v. m' \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 W2 c4 a; x6 x. [- C2 w, v; a  t( {, |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 J3 T/ |$ q; T  ?( f) e0 G/ a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ?# ]3 _; y  K7 ]1 g7 H9 n& N  s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% I0 H$ [! E5 R/ u5 u) m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 E# w) h& {1 }+ x* s: Q! D# E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 A& \. y, A6 o: |7 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ @1 Y; f+ f- ^2 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; Q$ P9 z) I+ B9 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& g9 ^) I1 e9 i: m7 \4 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 N5 w& r9 v7 ?0 m7 f+ i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 j9 M0 x4 Q4 \8 V) B, Y9 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* k0 H  y7 i' C) \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( h. U% P' a" `1 h8 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ F/ V" `2 J& B, w% L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 I, x3 I/ i' t! ^/ X. \) g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 i4 Z; F5 P9 b) F+ |( q" @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 U# x; K& U! D; z<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 c& O  q' h4 }4 E" i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ b& [/ H8 _# l# H  K; \/ W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ?& q: W5 y5 |7 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' G: z0 G, i( ?4 R$ W' `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( b' D0 b* l2 ], a' x1 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. J9 q, Q$ j. c4 ^  f* }, r; h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 Q- Z$ t" v! n8 m. J3 b3 i: L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ E0 ~+ \1 ^9 n- n% `3 w  O) u我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ]2 w3 h4 i, {7 z' [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>