【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 Y) }2 G% I; m4 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 j# |: t- `' S8 ^2 ^( [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 ~9 t: \/ I$ J  f5 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% F4 q+ ]0 E! Y4 j! j3 I) XSeeing the sky content with its love
% F% j% o* t3 f& b1 l' FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; }7 {/ P& g- [- ]  ]% p5 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 D! E: S  b  D7 M) MNothing can compare to my love
1 G( J3 c4 y8 i: r$ E- LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* k# Z) P; t+ y9 X% a9 G& B/ }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' d5 ?( Z% {% A% N. K: lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, v, p5 t8 Z/ Q# L, f4 M$ g" tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) p5 K5 y, N& Z2 E* t6 y: bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- j& K5 X* L, bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 S; ^  \' ]% z' b. O0 R! ^: o% r/ IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. H& e$ s1 v  N+ ]" `6 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 y, h" \! u, l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: Q; @) }' z* m2 {! b' q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ e' ]  x' X' Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 j2 Y$ I* a9 \  Y# t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  U. |% {5 N" ^) j- c7 g8 x7 T( ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 a4 [$ r" u$ X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' |" W; o0 l9 C5 m3 S! v5 y% o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 X& P' k5 p( R3 j4 A. v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- V0 e1 B$ n$ d<P>你无需担心</P>
% R+ ]5 N& I( H, `2 O! L) K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ]% ?5 H: f* |6 g3 p; m. @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! T6 ]2 p) g: i2 [5 \* U5 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 C% x1 l2 K: m" Y( k' w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 k) U3 P$ @2 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, i; m5 ^7 S' r- S# N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ `$ z" y% l1 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 e7 c( h2 w6 t$ r+ k, \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 [! r: f# i& i8 c1 h/ _, V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* ^' N& I2 |  c4 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  J; t# I* K$ Y8 b4 [* _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' d2 U" D* i/ G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% \! f; k2 g' X- b. r  s9 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
' r6 {$ }: X- X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 H/ w  ?8 F, h# A! W1 n6 y# l( Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 @; @$ L) w/ A9 d# _: g, A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. X; s' x2 n% x. a- G( _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- z+ p' I& M2 @0 w5 Y2 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 u; A$ E% V! ?& g. A2 R" l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( C) R; |! z/ T6 P5 _/ h; T2 h  o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' B6 k5 q7 V' X( k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, U4 ^  H  Y7 y& r! z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 m/ Z$ |2 r* f0 Q' i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 W( l' j: X: z8 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>