【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 Q: C, T' N/ ~. a. S歌词我附在后面。
1 ^8 M% J5 X" W/ g4 k# o# A6 R$ M2 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 W) p7 Y5 E+ \7 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 z  z% F7 ?  ^With the moon kissing it every night
1 G! r9 C; ?. Q7 x/ c  QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 U, |! w) s( D! I' b' pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 N' o. J3 |7 ?7 R% J' H: gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 w9 F% ^6 [; A2 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 t! M( c1 ]. LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. t! G  x2 I# p/ D- SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( B3 i# L2 Q8 X9 L4 I6 S- NI’m still filled with fear
/ K0 W7 W& _  f7 X$ S8 `* z8 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 ?3 B# W# t, {; h2 R- N. L) gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% M3 L  s; d3 a# Z% r! u$ rWith such a tongue as yours,
4 \; H1 A, K0 |# i" L: j) GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* r0 ]6 Y* K% ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* Q6 F' V, \' N1 x0 ]4 c2 t+ o, l) G' x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 U6 b7 w1 N8 S% Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& X) N3 h1 Z+ l, F, C1 }( ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# O5 p6 _5 y3 |6 ^9 N* a, b: k# H3 d9 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! y$ V2 R( x" Q3 Y( ~4 t  G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# G' }1 P# _5 p* A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 E  o1 C4 c7 Z% S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ?  P, l; ^  s# x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 A, R( C5 J( `# ]/ Q3 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ ^) }: I7 K* S7 v0 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 {& q7 w1 ~9 J* G) y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* b* |! {# L$ W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 i, @9 e2 g  g; k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& ^! [5 ]. K- g" \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: i* `! w3 J6 h4 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) y: I1 }- d2 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- H, M' P3 m7 f0 [+ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ E+ M9 f9 s+ H7 k1 ]* G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 ?$ `5 w$ N/ ~2 c6 r$ u' l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 q/ p! N* ~) n0 j/ y) S: F3 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 R/ ]& A4 I6 B1 I  K1 L% T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 K3 b, d# R7 I  l$ I  Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 _5 M2 o8 t- h, ?; Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
( w! K1 S3 Q' h/ v# ]
/ }4 L3 g( O0 N我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>