【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! e7 p& l; b* b+ v' ]# bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# _/ K8 I" e. i1 XSeeing the sky content with its love
4 r+ j: G8 h2 J5 ^7 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ v2 y+ c! `7 J6 c8 |% J6 tYou needn’t fear anything
  r2 J0 {9 T, y5 n) y) A+ w- QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- |$ A' L4 H5 F& r: C# z9 R' UEvery other word you utter is love
. Q- e8 k2 h6 e, n3 @I really want to know just how much you love me
2 @# p8 b, J2 n% T9 \' O( hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( o2 K* r8 k; qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, I" u3 {! q- J% OI want so much to see inside your heart
' }  {5 {, O, u) |3 {/ a4 o5 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ F- v. e6 s" p. W* f+ OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% D+ H% i8 g& c3 e8 s: gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 T# m. l% J* J7 E0 k) fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ]' Q" ?5 y  x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ Y( [5 |* @- G4 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) P! M; u7 h& S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ U6 z, @  ^8 R3 X5 x6 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& _* V: o/ H' F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 a+ Y& V- f! K  |5 d. @0 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 F0 K4 }* N' p6 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ?& @: E2 n+ N% u9 P( @0 b* o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 `3 B) |, N) _2 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( V) l5 ]! l1 e: a: z9 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( @1 h7 m) F$ V7 J( ^0 ?+ Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* V) A$ Y5 m+ }9 h5 B) i# V0 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 U5 e7 D+ U" v- Q1 A+ ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: s* ]8 q$ L: r: E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 S* U! d( P. U$ W- I' A$ n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ o  v1 B, a; C1 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ S* P# h1 e& Y. @+ V: l( D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- k+ ]# Y! q5 _9 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; M9 F& |/ V( ?0 o% D) y& ~, M! A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, b: {8 v1 z- E' }: f2 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 M" o1 j4 Z3 G, O6 f- h8 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) {  L4 Y$ S# g8 x9 _% W: A" d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 b5 x( I3 T3 J; H2 d' g6 p1 M" i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 n; e! p( z" l9 O* C' a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, Y" n! e& `. w* s( U" U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* t- p/ J2 M0 p8 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' s/ E6 ?- [2 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# L5 }/ V+ p/ x5 }0 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( s6 W' n; h) X) Q3 v我请你剖开它

9 q- G" f7 Q4 G' b- {. C$ T2 a# U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 G  {. A/ q$ z, g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>