【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
- o$ M( i  h# c" w4 }+ IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 K9 g7 i( J! K# \$ E8 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: C% ~& E; w& s- S5 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, d: j+ z, b2 P( U1 }8 A: dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ r0 @$ K/ a( c9 M8 p# s: OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) n8 l3 E* L+ T$ a' M: w; F) LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) v8 C: w7 D5 E( z8 o* t, qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, `, x$ ?. p; V3 W$ ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( p3 |  K/ c( [6 x1 eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 y) |5 i- W) k! y$ |7 d  k0 c$ mWith such a tongue as yours,
. B, F# ~* i6 N9 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 |1 N% L0 F. ^& @. r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- q* C8 M% t( G- d  m& \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- N( h" S% ]9 Z- z5 X. z  _8 h5 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. l0 ]. {3 N+ u" Y8 a3 [0 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ q' K# K2 C; M  K& s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& A- J, @1 ~0 M6 A% q( m- t. z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  ^7 _8 S9 R" U6 @2 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- H( i4 H# S6 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' a: n" f6 C& _5 e- y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% X& e( N9 p1 g8 W8 H+ m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& C$ I9 E2 v* o# g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. @+ \- V2 ^* b  `5 m! g  ?, Y$ G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: Y5 S4 U1 j' o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 |* [. r2 v2 v2 ~0 _" w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: r. v. E4 ^$ V7 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 @1 {8 y& g0 u. y# n* c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- q$ i; _, \; a3 M. V4 L+ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' N* `' M7 ]/ q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; q- z8 \* B7 D1 T, }6 I6 L" k$ D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 [4 u! Z' Y. L. f  K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' l  _- d' y& M$ N$ a; X0 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' G  t3 ?1 h0 w: Q. d, J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 F+ u7 m' y8 {" _8 p' p' x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: |9 z% j! L, b% ~! m+ m0 F9 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, b% g3 D& F  G3 ]$ R2 N! C2 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 H7 K# o/ K, b; y& @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ A  l* _% x) b% Z/ b5 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* k+ A- k5 B' c6 }# m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' R' F8 h* z6 K0 I5 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 f; _" _! z* Z- h/ E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 H: z  d3 I+ ^2 i2 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 H- T2 \( T6 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>