【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# a$ U  s4 H9 G3 }& E, m  K4 b9 Z歌词我附在后面。
, M. l! w# P6 ]  `' ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 o$ t8 J) u3 M% a5 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  I- Q+ P8 w7 S* Q0 @& i7 K! SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& A7 A& R: b. ~0 X0 V  iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  m3 V& s$ h  jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# E' B2 y! C9 a! w9 _9 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ ^! J* |4 u. \! v) k: E5 HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 w  a2 g8 S$ t; y1 n; p) E; T+ M. qI regret not dying
8 a" q5 u+ d0 S- H5 |0 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# T* H1 d, p3 K8 s9 dWith such a tongue as yours,
8 A1 c- V" o6 l% HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 T  j# A2 K$ n$ `  lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 P1 L6 |3 f7 W7 W& V/ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! S# L+ N. k' z1 f- I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 T# c6 i: K- t# H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ e8 N, X! [% o  [1 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 t, }. s1 N# @4 L1 |- Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ c& A) T' |1 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 r: o, g. s& E  O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* \! l- {7 M6 H$ q$ X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% y  [( {3 m: q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ p# Z5 b% e2 P' U; |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ ~) T; V0 B4 K- ~6 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. |6 I" o- A  m$ i2 h+ k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 K) j- b" C- g( D8 Q+ n0 {! d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! Q; N0 `& @" e" b/ M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 M( y- v7 f! w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, M) r8 Z' z( |0 m, Y: H6 r+ d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# z+ [- v5 ?$ u9 S: ?/ ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 H, {! J5 }- f' M" m2 R: @* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 C1 r/ p" @, c5 \$ U. S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 s4 N; O, M* [7 B& j' s! p( x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. N& O, r# X# u2 M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 Y' n  e/ T- ^/ N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 b$ e% a+ N' x0 E1 N7 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, j& I0 M2 w4 m, u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; r" s& P9 ~0 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* e; x4 W5 {1 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ v& j, [( q6 ^$ y7 D. f' O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: O  X5 B1 y; U" n& g% K* Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* D* ]; }% _6 V+ ^- G1 J7 ?- Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% o+ O% T( E4 Z; {# y! _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 [5 ~7 W) {' g3 O( z7 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" [  c6 f& |/ B: L& a+ Q$ q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% R& B; ^# [) P- ]# W" N% M* S我请你剖开它
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% }4 W! ^$ |! Y' F8 T/ Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>