【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 w7 l) G6 ?$ p+ b% S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 S2 Q! c  i+ [3 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 ?' [/ Y5 |6 G, n( x& l1 w( \# MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 z6 x$ q, R" N6 _. ~Why is it so difficult to express?
) O. R$ A* _% }- D8 Y/ dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 N/ c; O7 j0 s0 ?& kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' x3 o' Y6 Q8 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 i  d1 |% k: L0 s0 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! V- F6 s; T7 j8 A1 C; LCan I entrust it to you?
5 ^( T+ _! {7 }  m; h4 e. e9 vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, o( z1 D! T! VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# K) y$ I. o$ T4 p: `; z/ ^: ^6 W' MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! q  r* e* X- k& J7 v) r7 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: B1 r6 w7 Y( UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% p% r, o, i% q* k; D% t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 B! k5 l$ j! C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  K. |# g, ~0 t+ O  B8 H; |" L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( i" ~. g+ W- s5 X, K% A, ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  V) i; h" n4 D9 O2 g. m/ L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 l1 S/ W3 p4 }% o6 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! l3 J+ w8 y; b7 n7 Q- z- _" V<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; q* e0 K& Z4 \. L  ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 j/ x7 U& t7 R( C: p6 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) [7 Q0 a+ B/ R- S9 T+ |3 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( p7 c  E5 Y+ {3 d* ?" x/ e0 t; ]: [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 S6 x+ e% \; L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 _8 m7 T) P/ I; L! ^5 N& s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  Q2 }6 C4 ~: `+ p! P* I- e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ _1 b' X6 i* @# n% v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" D' d. V0 S' C$ t& N# d1 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. |, p$ B, b1 I. Y- _2 V+ x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 o' g; q  D2 X2 @% x% G: {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ @6 y7 m8 l# D) _& `/ H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. z/ M% `! P" c' y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ }' `% Y( O9 t$ q/ ?9 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ s! E1 R& ?/ E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ^5 h) H$ c7 {: O2 G# K7 E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>