【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 h* d& ~" K  \' b" [/ E我另将歌词附在此。
& h& y9 M1 e+ _/ |% c' n! rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) L- N7 A( {- t/ W6 f# Z6 z) rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) I( g& s) {# D! e* q  [1 Y. C- u, eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& V) O8 X; P/ V! i" ~' O& R8 uI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ _- ]" s1 I  i+ POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 Z2 p: Y7 q' S3 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 s8 D1 X" b( ]2 {Can I entrust it to you?
1 v" N+ H" E' O2 e& I4 ?  i& zEntrust my love within your heart
  `# G, ~' K" RLove… just the word love
1 B* R$ G  a1 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
, F$ Z: Q/ }5 ?# c+ eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ @0 [" e4 H9 m$ I6 }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 U+ q, X2 K1 w+ EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  }* L# C5 ^. u3 y+ h  M+ |4 QEntrust my love within your heart
" P4 y) ]: l4 a. b2 j5 k/ U' ^Can I entrust it to you?
: k: m7 j1 w" B. p( }; k* s9 SEntrust my love within your heart
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/ C, u+ X+ a* B- ~8 |: r$ I4 e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' U5 k  |. c5 C4 w4 |3 l) x+ _( E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 Y6 w0 E6 T) e/ O$ Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ {; u$ G: f! y: z: t0 D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& Q2 e8 O: i! R7 ]& i; i* `  o" t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 f8 d" E2 O; _. `: S) b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 [7 O* u! J+ C8 A9 `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' x) o+ j" o5 p+ J5 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 g7 \8 H/ k4 v+ h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' O1 j6 K1 D) S) M6 _; m; O' D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 F; J. p. j* e, {# L8 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: t' F% j! [5 }& V2 r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 b) |6 P" n9 r( d8 A+ p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ l1 U6 j, X  r' }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: G/ ~7 e- X$ O7 M( ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 z: b( q# ?) |( y" [& w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, H0 h2 J7 z! v0 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 L. d+ V; T: f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ g5 {3 T) j0 C" }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& p0 O, `9 N1 q" M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ W1 M7 t( o; M. p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ L' p0 M. w, n1 u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 S( j5 ?7 |0 s+ x: Q" D' b* s, F; _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. Z; K$ y% {- k- e: j<P>But I never did </P>
3 d& S/ g) ?5 `5 {& l5 B; D<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! a0 O% x$ j: [  }, K2 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* a8 E1 o  Y* _, i7 L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ?: Z& L# [  ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 o/ Y2 z: r! |+ S9 W" U2 H% x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( I( C7 A& o. e, N! ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( u6 ^3 t4 m% S: Z& u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ d/ W8 B& X# @- J5 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 h: w- L+ U$ k$ b1 k8 S- I! L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 g6 M: f* y! U/ Z8 U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 [8 K2 d/ a" x" P% z" i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; J2 O, O. K5 W6 Z9 e0 ?) j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>