【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 d5 W4 J6 ]" x! ?% x% J5 W. i我另将歌词附在此。
7 i  p, B4 n4 ^+ Q0 _; WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& d  o4 h# [. r. B  j0 A. bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 A5 _9 x$ o0 |* o8 j! lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" x; ?& ?$ O: H; Z: EI want to confess that I love you,
6 ~% w/ M1 `* W; mBut I never did
: H" V9 s& ?& [/ T/ K6 |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% i" Y; W, a% N4 O) G4 _1 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 d" j& A% Z& {, N) N* rCan I entrust it to you?
5 N) t; Q+ ^2 V. T) w* sEntrust my love within your heart
" r5 y3 X" T, VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 c7 M4 U; {* ^) ?I want to confess that I love you,
2 q" v2 _% A7 \2 q6 xBut I never did
4 \4 y# E2 n/ U; }" c: k  WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ I" @& o  S' s$ q+ Q0 p) UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ E& I. Y- }& I* u( H& r. Z6 SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 M* P* F7 o/ Z& {* vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

% A8 o; t( Y9 a  m1 `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ S# t7 R! e) i! {0 `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 {; L0 c5 A5 |; R5 ~$ I* M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 h  T* O% v5 i1 G2 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; h0 y4 M$ D& O2 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) _& C, d' ~- O9 K, N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. |0 o+ X. L0 e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; A8 \9 g2 S' @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 A( H$ l0 L! a% O& Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: }' z1 A7 b+ J7 y: j& N( r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* y) b: v) Q* I) x<P>但我不会</P>
* H5 [: ?9 u; s2 x; i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* |- @1 `1 A. j9 b5 e' u- G/ S  ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) n! e# Q0 C4 v$ _. \) v& T1 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! \4 w3 K5 q! s' s1 N1 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 ^/ e: C0 s! Z) T  [! s  }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! b# o/ @9 ?1 b% ?# a' |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: l) U) z" M- A$ _0 \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 d6 A. h3 {) y, w" s. T2 B# B3 @<P>But I never did </P>
4 H6 w1 ^; q9 u8 ^<P>但我不会 </P>
" b3 }) \4 `& _( `0 h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ g7 r+ ?; ^, q3 b' e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ o# Y! k% E5 _6 U$ K- A) N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" x4 U, W" R' M. Z0 t. ]; k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 @  t# h! v+ \$ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  y0 U- i; q1 I; B. _$ B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ]- @- Y  L; ^2 J+ m- J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' s8 k; X) \6 D0 V( W% k; y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 ?+ Z- H& ]" g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. M) t, |7 c0 n4 Z7 Z, V; p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 L" k6 q" l$ P% k6 `* n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>