【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. P. O) m1 }: x& qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 {- g% ~8 p6 W% X, j! X! ~& UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 c" J- w7 g5 d5 mWe meet and talk everyday,
$ r7 b+ _8 d/ l( mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% w8 q/ g( I7 \& I! BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& P; S, L! ~( k  ~Love… just the word love
" S) {. z# |7 V4 d% S$ j8 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# ^) R$ M; t. r4 n. L! c. dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 h, {& B. Y! m, t  P# o+ {Love… just the word love
0 Q& H+ w) }' Q* iWhy is it so difficult to express?
, q+ Y) q  |6 k* h# D4 XI want to confess that I love you,
. Y6 B% Q" U, Z1 C9 k$ E5 EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ r9 j' i% [2 p4 Y* TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: C( K/ [/ G# T% D3 z% zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ E2 O1 L+ m* O; e' h$ ~: \Can I entrust it to you?
# P" H9 ~1 ?9 X! h  L6 ?2 T( E* _- [Entrust my love within your heart

& P0 {6 f8 i; q7 N4 H! j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ R/ [' y( r3 ]0 a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, e2 J( r. {' v* F9 u6 r5 S9 o0 V) _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, \. V- G/ s! K& {' C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& o  D! e, j7 q6 _# e! M4 M! w+ b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: {# o: N: O" `0 m# ]' f- Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" r) Y* a& R+ t2 q* X. @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( J. \5 U2 t3 v& d, v% F$ `+ h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; L* Y% p' E& @! y% Q% X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* n% k% h7 q9 C& g: x* e, m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. c0 I1 j3 W6 s3 E( O+ T8 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" }  }8 s' ?; y! R* _. o$ P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 V" E0 ^+ }: N% _1 p; }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( b- w. |+ r5 [7 w. k. C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' Y; b% ^: O0 X% \/ Q, `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! e7 b. i' h' k2 K# }8 M- Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! e2 Q# I! E& H7 w& M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( `, t: k% ^7 e5 A  f  k- G: n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! {# P5 c+ V7 P! c/ |1 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 J0 x9 ?9 ]* g+ H  t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* T: k9 k/ B9 j, ?0 E+ R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( _7 F. ?. [; Z4 M# ^4 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ ]/ a9 w9 D7 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 G% |; K* ?8 m. N2 I- C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& \2 c2 }1 I0 b0 A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>