【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
( t: z- o' m; oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ l3 @' t: J* T2 z7 p( A, lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ h  G1 Z4 P8 K$ eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, V3 z! I- m4 N  }) ]# T! AWe meet and talk everyday,
, u0 a( J" T( W  ?% SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) f1 p& O9 F8 N5 |I would probably know how you feel
4 b/ m* D1 k" Y; OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ q; n- {* _2 |  o. X* B) t! lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! x0 C7 Z, c/ m1 D; wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 d5 |/ Z! A7 }( d1 T" `Can I entrust it to you?
1 O0 ]% o% X" m3 fEntrust my love within your heart
& F( u0 E6 g1 T9 G& C7 rLove… just the word love
" k! W, \) K8 M( H8 _# H, gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. V/ P5 G2 C1 v0 S' e7 LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) t. K/ I( _8 _  G" TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 i6 b4 M1 e4 w3 ~3 V  v) U( fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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" U5 m$ \! h+ w- {# N: d( R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% b, m( ~3 ~% I5 u6 R6 t4 d9 A4 P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 _# [% F; @0 \3 `2 [: T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& ~6 u" p! w, a( S4 i- E, o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 p8 v( J4 M+ C& C  B& p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- G/ b. d& r/ W7 r' J4 m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 S' f9 _9 b7 ^2 O6 M9 F6 M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 u6 y5 N# ~7 Q4 O1 y0 E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 P8 `+ t. z& K6 z$ h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& h' o0 `: j: Z! a. |4 _& e3 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 Q+ D* q6 P; d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( H2 V" B  c* g5 b+ Q/ U4 ^2 U<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) c5 D% s7 m" p) W+ d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) n$ d* J$ g1 _0 u4 K/ g" j<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  @& X) w1 S! w( e# P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 s6 `5 d  E' I2 r0 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 X: N) @; ]9 U1 Q0 ?: f3 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, |+ X, g5 B. }' ?8 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 n7 b( J* E) @/ }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) I' R( `% U- `0 ~" R9 [8 B& R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ G4 A* i8 i# K, Y+ }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 U3 U2 J1 E' |$ p* B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 V" W+ _9 c" U2 g5 S4 f& t2 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' |2 N% i+ F8 x+ l& _5 n, ]& U, {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 l! V& }, U6 j: g<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: G# g; d9 y( E2 V) S+ e7 q% ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& n! Q+ D) E& E8 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 N5 c& ]6 g& Q5 @& U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 j- k3 `* [' x% }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 G& o9 x  p' d8 P$ t% V  v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 Z3 R, Q2 X% ?" B6 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% A4 t# W* G9 E) A+ z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( w7 K- F  n7 v3 U9 @" ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 t. {+ v- z4 |. _+ o& ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>