【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  S9 D5 h+ @7 e7 u+ X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 ?9 S: K3 u5 vFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" B. I& u% a% f6 R% C* fWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  J- v* O9 v! d- u: lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 r2 ]( h/ `8 h$ ?4 `+ \  {I want to confess that I love you,
" ?. R7 ?; E/ L7 b* ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 L# |* }7 p% @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- k. F' r  S: g3 L' [. D) TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. p2 [" l3 v5 h6 I) zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 ~. Z+ d6 ^3 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
. _. t% p1 Z  I* |' y# pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 b$ k& \& |( G6 u. q. LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 x' U: m8 f; l+ PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 o+ @+ A' i3 d7 }2 f- B+ jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- L: Q( i9 s/ Z  jEntrust my love within your heart
4 W9 [/ A  M$ }) A- W7 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 g% E0 ]; s( P. a5 t5 R0 T; T. P3 X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 R% |, `/ k0 a( u' Q4 p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ A9 _8 N# k3 y& G! [$ a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* s8 E% w5 S9 Q0 N+ O  J- O2 }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 D+ C- O$ @/ ~5 y3 I* P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% E. G% t. I- v; ]# G# O$ ]7 }' f) z; B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: n* N* N0 p+ `. t  d' X: Y3 _8 P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  W+ F: q& ~- Y, S$ t, ^8 M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* t3 _3 @2 i: S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 K- s  X( C. E+ a4 d+ n: i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ r+ H& L6 t# ^6 r: X( |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: Q8 A% h; ~8 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; @1 I- b2 d9 o8 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 T% |7 ?3 n* R& f9 ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ V/ E2 n7 U8 j: r1 Q5 D" x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ l3 f# z8 Q2 d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. Z* c7 E% I/ O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 q. j! {1 G  K5 w$ k) ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 C8 C7 J$ ?# s7 g) L& X* \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. s7 |2 D6 ~; m) ?9 p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( R! x& j  b4 |8 O2 ]- H- m9 y, k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' r' @% _# j+ _  q8 r8 c3 V5 ]9 r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 i8 W4 T# V0 h- b/ T  h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 A8 m' S) j/ B8 v# a5 Z3 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; ~9 _( U2 Y5 l$ ?5 D# C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ H6 \* S! k& ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ e% b5 s( U' n) B- I' q7 J/ I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, ?$ y- L4 z" i  N. L/ y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>