【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& n& m. [+ |7 x2 k; J+ R% xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) ?& N  l! ?# m3 y! D/ I8 S$ vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' B# h# G/ F* gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 Z8 T: p- X6 q( Z2 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
" E) ?/ m! X3 X' K' Y4 ~$ g& yI want to confess that I love you,
0 \1 F% m) y+ j" D/ p( C) v$ k& L; y3 IBut I never did
& e4 F/ M& _5 d9 A3 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( L3 ^$ K$ b: B* O; zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 `  B+ F/ P' o4 A3 X+ m% K) w5 iEntrust my love within your heart
% c6 S. L" G7 V+ ^Love… just the word love
* ?  I9 h, @: hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& J. v1 U/ C4 cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ z9 G& x2 j6 M% ?$ y& ^If today isn’t too late,
. Q+ @( T, s3 H+ `( tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, u+ k& u8 W# E( ]: T! r9 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 K+ V3 P* u& @; t- }Can I entrust it to you?
5 A! P& L6 }2 J$ hEntrust my love within your heart
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8 h' u6 s8 S" ^# l9 }" M: t9 J4 ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  }  Y" w  p' R9 A5 L. [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  S  t) J* f. g- ~3 X7 Z# h8 S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 z9 K+ Q; n; K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 t8 h& v, q6 }8 _% K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  y' g$ P3 f- z' \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& }) d8 i: @3 }" l1 {; n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  ?" u8 J7 ~# b6 i2 {. y5 U6 G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 V" R& [0 S* |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 B) y6 _+ w7 A. `( b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 |/ k. ~8 v( O9 C; F& U0 D. j' K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 P5 i( A: ~" c6 Z: q- q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) D( N: W+ R  Z+ F2 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 b6 e0 r  a- B7 c: V0 H' P) [7 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 W5 s' S$ ~) b9 r6 }/ \6 B9 P" d2 `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 I8 s( v1 |7 d$ q/ H! _4 y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 i. y- }3 X6 a$ y+ {9 F4 o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 t3 I* T- x; N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 }( d, O7 Y: v! j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 N/ u; C# ^# z- d. A5 H5 S: R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  H- s4 Y& \1 J6 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 O) b& E2 G; E2 {+ @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 h1 X  O9 f$ g) J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 u* s; ^) Q8 I8 e& N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 u9 \& n- W4 |, b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 h. v: ~: P; [4 y2 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>