【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ u# G6 u# a( h. b/ sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! j1 n0 X# S2 R. ^  i' UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- c7 J$ E2 Y) Q! _5 CLove… just the word love
. V8 X, ?% O* cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 K; B% m/ Z  u/ z+ `: e' `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. v, ^6 s2 V1 K2 o  ?2 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* I6 L2 R3 y% ]/ xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! A. H1 P1 ?& A4 L# f9 ^6 A* K  oCan I entrust it to you?
! r( l  W* A) r; mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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2 `2 }, l% r+ C  f4 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( E1 E6 f+ E8 e& O+ r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& L% K3 c% |4 u) ]* k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! y1 k- T& y, h& ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- \' |9 y! O! a4 t7 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ {3 b: d7 e( h7 Q: A( {4 T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 ?" w# g! l; z, J3 R4 G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! f& B$ O* C2 n: p3 G' N  Q/ f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 ^9 S/ f7 j" x3 \6 m1 F# i' e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 N" A* P- b) y% i# S1 }( z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ |$ b; |! [; S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 u& s% M* ^1 A% o& K) |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 G0 B+ j9 H  T# U8 w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' @) B- s, [9 C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ ^+ r, {( `, X- u* Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ p) `: Z7 c5 ^$ i7 V# V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) g  g3 r- v, S( }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( ?  [: r0 ?- C+ f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ B  T# y% }* r) j1 o( p$ ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 w# l6 r7 T0 }& Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 R( N  C1 s+ ~: x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( e% q7 y/ ?/ L3 ?2 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ E1 b- M' Y) x) W" W$ h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% T7 p* m2 ^: Q. q/ f4 ]0 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 p' C. L# S/ {' [' T, J! G: P3 \2 c8 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* y5 H( ?0 ^/ g8 A' q+ I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ R$ D  W# f7 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  h; ~, R! j9 R3 D5 Y- k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>